i liked it danny was almost as pure as naruto lol I've always been more of a kratos i probably would have brutally murdered my mom dad the guy's in white vlad and anyone else who had anything to do with the situation

I just have a question... Why did you call it the Green Sharingan? There is no Sharingan even in it... I'm confused...

Yo, this actuily sounds like a good story, yet you really never focused on zabuza. All you stated was that he was reincarnated, but never gave any proof. Infact, if you could write the final battle scene, have one of danny's powers be him summoning zabuza's sword... Except it can work on ghosts and humans. This was a good story, and here's just somthing I'll throw out to you... Naruto and school rumble. What happens when the container of the kyuubi is thrown into the world of school rumble? A pairing of naruto and yakumo, invest your time into this anime, I highly recommend it. And take the story if you want, it's never been done before.

Oh God, at least you're honest with yourself. I'm sad to see a story go unfinished, but considering I only read the first two chapters and was a little scared, I think it's for the best.

I just hope you don't end up abandoning the fandom completely. There are quite a few stories that are really very good. You are always welcome to browse my favorites...anyone is really but I'm 'talking' to you... (Especially one story called, Lab Rat (Which I beta-ed for! *jumps for attention*) is especially good and filled with all that is lovely about DP.)

Really, don't let a bad experience with the mirror get you off writing. I, for one, saw potential in the writing. Decent characters, interesting idea...at first...and overall good writing. I think with a little more plotting and a good smack with the OC stick, it could have been really interesting.

Well, if you ever decide to get back on the horse and want a beta, I'm always willing!

Hip to be Square,

Dragon

i hate you!

i was waiting for an update and you do this!

ggggrrrrrraaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

Looks like you finally finished this story after three years. Normally people won't even bother to touch a story after three years. Anyway, this was a fantastic read. And it seems like my oldest review is still here.

Good ending.

Nice story. I wasn't expecting Toph to be there! I hope you update soon

MORE! THis is AWESOME

Please update. Will Valerie appear again?

u r heartless u have to update sooner it was an amazing story and i want to know what happens next update soon really good

XD i love this! please update soon!

Really well done. I am not a Naruto fan myself, but i love how you have tied this in. And the side line with the dreams? Really creative. Little Red Riding hood... hehe. This is well written and you should really update!

All in all, I would love to see more of this fanfic. I don't understand why you made him take off his shirt in open public like that. You made it seem like it was a prize he won. ALso, although the guys in white will conduct very painful experiments on ghost, I doubt that meant half ghost so I think you took their meaness to a whole new unheard level. Still nice story and would love to see more. Ja Ne

Ndasuunye

It's obviously Gaotou oprotive N. But anyway, this was weird. Turqoise blue eyes. Is this someone from Naruto again. Well good work anyway'