This was beautiful, it satisfied me so much! Rxactly how i envision the pair! Loved it.

I really like how Marcus saw the colors of Bella and Edward's relationship, the fact that they were so surprising to him. Twilight is a tale of trials that turned into the deepest love.

Interesting story.
Though Marcus seems a bit crueler than I like to imagine him.
One part I have a slight objection too is when he said he was "stronger" than Edward. According to the guide the only reason he didn't commit suicide was because Chelsea's power bound him so tightly to his coven that he couldn't.

I LOVE this it's AMAZING my favorite I never thought about it this way LOVE IT LOVE IT

This is a unusual and fascinating idea, normally I like marcus to be more compassionate but your version suits him in the story this. Thanks for a great story! _

awesome I liked him in New Moon

wow this was different but good to know where Edward and Bella was and is bonded at and wow.

loved it!

Wow! It was like bringing the new moon scenario thru Marcus eyes:-D! And the concept of colour was brilliant! You beautifully said the true, intense and pure love and the strength of it, between Edward n Bella

It was really interesting to be inside Marcus's head. Great job!

Very interesting look into how/what Marcus sees. Thanks for sharing.

Fascinating and absorbing story! I loved how you described the auras. Thanks.

nice one. Liked it almost as Red roses

Are you accepting Beta Requests?

I really like it! In fact, I love it! :)