| Reviews for Sunsets at Stark's |
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The Quiet Shadow XVII chapter 1 . 2/10/2010 OH MY GOD. This made me melt... and cry. Stolen by Dashboard Confessional didn't help, either. "“I ask because … because I think my purpose in life is to love you, Kyle. That I was put on this Earth to fall in love with you. That you are my soul mate, somebody I’m supposed to spend the rest of my life with…” he says gently, taking my hand in his and turning me to face him as the fading daylight forms a silhouette that frames us between the shadows of two peaks." Amazing. |
Prince Darkcloud chapter 1 . 5/14/2009 this is so sweet...I felt tingles go up and down my spine as the scene unfolded (that may sound creepy, but trust me, it's a compliment _) |
Amber Truesdale chapter 1 . 12/10/2008 AW...THATS THE CUTEST THING I EVER READ. JUST TO CUTE. SO FAVORITING |
TheXYZ chapter 1 . 6/17/2008 It was happy! It was adorable! *faves* I won't read any more of your stuff now, lest they be too depressing for me to handle. But rest assured you will be getting A LOT of reviews in the near future. :D Btw- even in your happy fics, Kyle is a very different person than the Kylie-poo most people portray him as. I don't think it has to do with uke or seme... it's just the whole personality... it's different! Can't say I'm willing to change what I see as IC for my Kylie-kins, but it's definitely uber cool to read. |
Rin Requiem chapter 1 . 5/15/2008 Aw, I loved the end! Great story! Though I would've thought at least STAN's parents to be understanding :/ |
Luna C. Starque chapter 1 . 1/28/2008 That was really nice. I loved the beginning, it made me laugh. The only thing is right before the kiss it got a little too sappy. Maybe it's just the mood I'm in? I don't know, I feel like they were behaving a little too girly, probably because it seemed like they could recognize their emotions and voice them. Can guys do that? Most of the ones I know can't. Anyways, great story, really well-written and sweet. |
Lilchicky004 chapter 1 . 1/8/2008 Oh, so beautiful. I adored this. The mood, the description, the atmosphere, the Style - it was all perfect. Stan and Kyle are so destined for eachother. Their fate is to be together, I believe. And this beauty just verifies my faith in them. Ah, such a beautifully-done piece of writing. I can't get over it! |
Sapphixiation chapter 1 . 8/22/2007 Aww! I love it! I actually drew a picture similar to this, sort of... except the two were standing up, instead. Ah well... I love this fic. It was great, just the thing to get me through 3 hours of marching band, and not a lot can do that. Oh, whee. I'm floating right now. Sunsets at Stark's... I wish my girlfriend and I had a Stark's Pond we could go to. -pouts- Great job; love the metaphoric description and dialogue. I'd like to read more from you. ) -Sapph |
Genis Aurion chapter 1 . 8/22/2007 You fail. Not really. It's a nice one shot, if only I WERE (not was, silly) into this genre at the moment. I think in stylistic terms, you've done okay. |
milkshakehobo chapter 1 . 8/22/2007 I enjoyed this. Don't get me wrong; I totally did. But my one gripe is that it got really romantic, too fast. I'm not entirely sure that a guy who wasn't exactly certain about romance with his male best friend would beg for the friend to kiss him at the first opportunity the way that Kyle did. Wouldn't there be a little hesitance? "I know my parents would kill me, but what the hell, why not"? I did enjoy the whole philosophical angle you took, though. Just got a little fluffy for me. Good job! |
Genki1 chapter 1 . 8/21/2007 Wow! I REALLY loved this fic! I have to say, it was refreshing to read a South Park fic that wasn't dripping angst. Don't get me wrong, when written well an angsty read can be a good read, but I just felt that there have a few too many recently. It was nice to read a short, sweet fic that gave the impression of a realized romantic love "in the moment". I also liked how you incorporated the spiritual aspect as well. I thought it brought a sort of added beauty to the story which made the situation even more lovely. I can't wait to read more of your work in the future . |
MasterBee chapter 1 . 8/21/2007 Aw thats so fluffy and sweet1! SO ADORABLE AND LOVING!1 OMG I JUST LOVE THAT!1 Heh I just love how they were casually holding hands at the start! Thats just so sweet, and ya knew where that could lead to next! Well Stanny can be rather insightful at times can't he! And like you said on MSN, making Kyle sound dumb, I don't think so.. Its not exactly a simple question to answer, or get the point of straight away! And little did their parents know, in trying to prevent them becoming gay (which they already were and didn't know it) they're the ones who kind of set it off.. Making Stan wonder like that! Lol, I love how they're so comfortable with each other.. Walk in on porn and a shower, and just think nothing of it!.. hehe nice, and I reckon thats how they would be as well! OMG and that kiss, that has got to be one of the sweetest ones you've written! Can see just how much Kyle was getting into it, and how special and powerful a first kiss is! Especially from someone you just KNOW you're going to spend the rest of your life with, with no doubt in your mind at all! Aw Stan: "I miss you already, and we haven't even left yet" Eek that is SO SWEET! YAY for sweetness like that! Makes me wonder how the parents will take it when they find out their sons have become what they've tried to prevent! Ah well, not that it will matter to them, they already know the risks, and don't care! After all they're made for each other, thats what matters! Yay, it was shortish, but dripping in such sweetness, and well written as always so it didn't have to be 20,0 word thing! ADORABLE! ME LOVED! |