I am at a loss for words. That was awesome!

Ash finally taking control?That's a first for me:)Loved the way you compared misty to ash, her always having to prove herself,and ash hardly ever having to prove himself apart from when he's around gary.I hope you can update soon!

:D :D :D :D :D Yay! I love this chapter, it's probably my favorite!

"Ash!" May scolded.

"I didn't mean to!"

"How can you not mean to read someone's journal?"

"Max read yours!" He cried in defiance.

"Tattle tale!" a voice yelled from the top of the stairs.

My favorite part (other than the end).

Hahahaha! :D I couldn't stop laughing (internally,if I laughed out loud my brother would think I'm crazy, not like he doesn't already, but still) at this chapter!

"So you were complimenting me."

She shrugged.

Ash put a hand to his face and fell dramatically and pathetically at the same time.

"Ash that was probably the worst time to do that."

"I can't help it. I've gone into shock."

"Then why are you speaking?"

"I'm mimicking Tracey when Rudy called you pretty."

For some reason, this is the part I laughed most at, even if it wasn't supposed to be funny!

Um, do you mean spring? Cause it's an awesome story, but you keep saying that it's sprig...

Aw that was so sweet, but I don't get it did Misty come back to life?

KAWAII

LOL, it really caught on fire! This is my fave AAML chappie!

Misty's alive? How? Cute chappie! Moving on to chapter 3!

Aw! How cute! Drew's good at snowboarding too? Wow... Now, chapter 2!

Aw, it was cute! Nice idea! And I loved the kiss scene, it was kinda hot! _

-*Starrycup665*-

It was very nice. Looking back over, it doesn't look like you've done an all silent oneshot, but you did a great job with it! It was short, but I think I'll let you slide if you promise to update soon! -wink, wink; nudge, nudge-

I wouldn't worry about the kiss scene, it was fine. A bit short, but then again, most one-shots are. Great job!

sincerely,

evan, a fan of aaml -EVAN AAML

Poor Ash...I wish Misty didn't die.

brilliant. :)