nice. i liked how she hit the body in frustration cause she gets no sleep now cause of the police.

hey i love this u should think bout sending it in becuz its really good an it would make a great for the show

Aww, I love it when Fin and Munch are all concerned for the other!

I'm so glad that the first L&A: SVU fanfiction I read was written by someone like you. This was beautifully done, capturing emotions and the realism in the series. I admire you for doing research for this. Wonderful job

Fantastic story! Excellent to see Munch and Fin get a case of their own to work - one of the problems with SVU is that it tends to focus more on Benson and Stabler and leave these excellent characters to the background. A wonderful, bittersweet ending and a brilliant portrayal of the snarky but caring relationship between the two partners. Fantastic!

I love ur story! Its really good. I just also wanted to let you know that you spelled Cragen wrong. It should be Cragen but you had Cregan. I saw the comment at the top of every chapter to let you know if there were errors and thats one I found. Other wise great writting!

This was a very good story. I really like the fact that Munch and Fin starred in this one instead of Benson and Stabler. I feel so bad for Fin at the end too.

Dear Writer:

I just completed reading your Law and Order:SVU fanfic and I thought it was a great story. Unlike the other so called L&O:SVU fanfics that center around some non-existant sexual relationship between Benson and Stabler, your fanfic was true to the actual TV series. I could actually see the characters acting out your scences as if I was watching my television. As a writer, I'm almost jealous (insert big grin here!) Well, if you have anymore SVU fanfics, or any other TV fanfics, (I know SVU isn't the only show you watch! -')please e-mail me and let me know where I can go on the web to read them at the web address above. May your fingers never tire out!

Sincerely,

OnyxessDragon

A L&O:SVU fanatic!

*sighs happily* Ahkay, so I'm not usually this obsessive about reviewing stories, but this one...this one deserves all the great, rave reviews it can get! You followed the case outline of the show to a T, and also managed to work in a good deal of drama and little tidbits with the characters. I was surprised to find a tiny undercurrent of Munch/Fin near the end. I don't know if that was your intention, but there was enough of it to warrent me comending you on it. I love slash, and working slash into an otherwise genfic is a great accomplishment. Kudos to you, and I hope to find more stories like this by you in the near future. Cheers!-TC

I can't get over how perfect you write the character's voices...every word seems as if it's straight out of a tape recording of this exact investigation. It's absolutely wonderful!

This is great! It reads exactly like an SVU show, only much, much better and much, much more original. I love this line: "Worn. Old." He looked up. "Like you."

*Snerk* Absolute Fin. Great job!-TC

Remarkable! Your writing, storytelling, and pacing of events...all of it. Absolutely remarkable! Dirty Blonde illustrates a fabulous understanding of all characters and elements of SVU. Ms. Terrice, you are a great credit to an outstanding show.

Bravo! Chapter 9 and the interrogation were decisively and intelligently written :)

Great job with the whole story :)

Very good so far, I can hardly wait to read the rest of it.

Wow...I'm usually not one for stories that are totally Munch/Fin, but you've got me hooked. Great writing. I look forward to more :)