Great story. Love bamf Gaasaku.

Love a dominating gaara.

One of my favorite chapters. Love Gaasaku.

I agree with you. Gaara could have me anytime and anywhere no matter who is around!

It's jinchuuriki. Not jurinchiki. Anyways, I love the plot and everything. Please edit it back to jinchuuriki, it's the real spelling...thank you for writing this!

Bro shit escalated so fast

I've read this for, like, 10 times already and I'm still reading. I think I'm addicted to your story. Thank you very much for writing this, I'm feeling better every single time I read this, please make more stories that not only have pairings but a really good content and plot, that's what made your story so good to read :)

Where are the lemons? Damn I only kept up with this story for those. I can't bear it any longer. One, your characters are OOC and immature. And your grammar sucks. Please study English. And please save us the pain in the future by not writing anymore. That would be awesome.

It's such a shame you never got around to making a sequel. I see you still write, so I hope you someday find the time. I remember finding this particular story when it was still in progress of being made. I lost track of it because whenever a new chapter came out, I was lost as to what was going on because I had read the previous one too long ago. I'm glad I came back to finish it. I'm not really good at being a critic, because I know my stories aren't up to everyone's standards either. If I had to give any sound advice, I'd say what a lot of people have said. The first few chapters happening all in one day was distracting. Honestly, you're one of my favorite Naruto writers. I don't know if you'll ever read this, but you're the reason I even consider Gaara and Sakura as a thing. My OTP is actually Sasuke and Sakura, but I enjoy to mix and match my parings in Naruto.

Ok I really tried to give this fic a chance despite the spelling and grammar errors. First of all, it's moving way to fast and it reads like a jumbled mess (no offense). Second of all you need some work on grammar and plot, however; is good. I think that if you took your time to introduce your characters and such, it would make it enjoyable and less confusing to read. Good luck with your other fics.

Kumi

How is Sauske to race her? She has, metaphorically speaking, obliterated his mind. Furthermore, how could he be so stupid as to not figure out what she is doing. Sakura, and everyone else for that matter, seems to be completely OOC. That would be a nice thing to know, perhaps listed in the description bar. Sakura also seems to be extremely OP. She also reveals to much information to everyone. Perhaps it would be better to list some of what she says as her thoughts. The whole story seems to be overtly rushed, making this a rather tedious read, regardless of the pretty amazing plot.

Wow. That was plain awesome, I can't find the right word to describe how incredible that was. Great job, both of you. I will totally be reading the sequel!

Nice job.

Aw! So sweet, great job.

That was good, can't wait till the next chapter!