Although I like this fic, I have to say Hermione seems to be confusing prophecy with actually making things happen. She seems to think Peter escaped and went back to Voldemort BECAUSE Professor T said he would. Peter would have escaped whether it was predicted or not.

Well written, though!

this was brilliantly done.

Very in character. Even no especially with the irrationality for the normally logical Hermione.I love it!

I love Sybil Trelawney, what are you trying to say here? Are you trying to say that she's a nut case? I'll admit I did have a dream last night in which she was my stepmother and while she had to take medicine to keep from losing her mind, she tried to be a good mother. That may be because I would like her as a mother better than my own mother, but then again, I'm about as unstable as she is. I even kind of look like her, at least that's what everyone says.

Outstanding. If you are into these types of fictions, I might suggest you take a good look at I don't know if you have lurked or have a profile there, but this seems pretty much up their ally. Anyways on to the review.

Plot 0.75

Technical Writing 1

Originality 1

Reviewer's Tilt 1

Characterization 1

4.75/5

I love it. I love how irrational and simple you made it, because loathing is exactly that, while still giving Hermione the depth of thought she deserves! I loved the repitition of "I hate you" it really gave the story a rhythm and bounce. In short, I loved it all. Great job, and do write again soon!

xxStellaxx

That was AMAZING!

Whoa, that was awesome. I never gave Trelawney much thought, but that was great! Thanks for a great story!

ChipmonkOnSpeed

Well done!

If you have the time, check out my own HP fic "Bittersweet Symphony" )