It's all very alluring, a mature woman w a younger guy, more even when you take into account their persona lololol
Don't see any pb w this piece. Pretty much delivers the msg teehee~

Lololol Hitsu-kun's going through puberty XD OH gosh, this fic was so funny, and sweet too! And the ending was so awesome lmao! I totally enjoyed reading it! Good work!

Peace Out! _

This was one of the sweetest things I'd read from these two so far... very well done, especially for someone who's first language isn't English! I loved it! Thank you for sharing!

you should write more can't leave me hanging

haha

great story!loved the scence in the mud!

lolz... hope you will write more!

It's not as bad as you think. It's very good and well-written. (:

Nice job on the shot!

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Miko-chan!

this is really good!

Not all that funny, but damn good, you should right a sequal lemon.

w another great story! lmao at 'surprise number 2' XD so cute

How could you say that was crappy? I laughed so hard I thought I would wake up my family! (It's one in the morning btw) Anyway, this was great and as I always say, WRITE ON! corny, I know, but what can I say, I have a dry sense of humor... yeah, I'll shut up now. Good job.

Haha, puberty...I really liked this one. It mixed really well with the genre humor, romance, and self reflection. Great fic. Loved the ending. lol. It happens. Another word for it is morning wood. haha.

wo. nice little lemony stuff there. Excellent composure and whatnot. definitley worth the read and I look forward to more of this stuff. Hard to find this couple, and even harder to find a steamy one.

I must say your english is OK , but i really liked the content

You know I love your hitsumatsu stories. This one is no exception. When I read your H-M material, its so easy to visualize, and it has the smell of reality..which is why until you update I reread and reread and reread...*-*...Life would be so rosy if they got together...

I think, by far, this has been the most interesting and the most well-made mature fic I've found using the pairing. And it's clearly plaudible as well. Good use of words and the theme was great. I suggest you keep on writing and making more one-shots like this one here. It was really a rarity to read such a well-written and wonderfully-made one-shot. Thank you for that.