I really like this!

Constructive criticism I can't do, sorry. Just, I liked it. More bitter than sweet story.

very sweet

very good, not long but enough to catch the readers attention, i'd like to read more of it if u'll just update ;-)

no more chapters? really? that's sad...

sincerely,

~marie0920~

It's always great to read well-written fics such as yours.

I really like your Theo, so endearing...and what I liked best is how you made Hermione distrust him and his possible intentions. Some author tend to forget that Hermione is supposed to be the rational and cool-headed one.

I see that you didn't continue this fic for a while now but I don't lose hope that you will update someday, hopefully soon...

Hugs from Greece.

Eris, Goddess of Strife.

Oh, I like it

However, careful, you tended to ramble a bit, and probably should have put punctuation in a few spots within the first couple paragraphs. They just run on too long, without any sort of halt.

other than that, it's great!

Whoa. That was incredible. Very creative, and emotional. What happened to Heather makes perfect sense, and Theo's amnesia is intriguing. He's so vulnerable, but apparently not helpless. Anyway, it would be awesome if this continued.

It really an interesting begining. I would be so appy if you could consider to continue.

Hey,

I really liked that first chapter and I hope you will be continuing on with this story soon. Keep up the great work XD

you need to carry this on, its such a great concept. well written as well.

i liked the first chapter! it was gripping (ergo well written)and i very much want to see where you take this story.

and overall good beginning to what i think has the potential at being something great xD

Oh, delicious! I have to say I'm absolutely fascinated with Slytherins (and Nott in particular) but this story, wow I'd just never thought of that sort of thing before. Firstly, I love that Hermione assumes the worst of Theodore despite only knowing that he disappeared and not knowing that he was a willing participant in the fight. Secondly, I love that away from the harshness of Slytherin and Hogwarts, Nott is actually a very vulnerable person, admittedly a lot of that would come from the amnesia but it does show the nature/nurture debate.

My only complaint - please say this isn't going to be a one-shot! I'd love to see a series made of it

In summary, wow, great story!

I have no criticism, constructive or otherwise. This is a good story, please continue it, I want to see what happens next! -Carl

I like Theodore Nott.

A lot.

So I'll watch this.