I like Naruto. And I respect him and admire him for loving a person unconditionally. I always love SasuSaku and NaruSaku as well

So beautiful, and so sad.

wow. denial with a capital DDDDDD. Mesmirk

That was a really confusing yet good story

Just a small question who is "he" supposed to be. Is it sasuke?

Haha, loved it

I think keeping the names to a minium was a good move

NOOOOOOO WHY MUST YOU HAVE KILLED NARUTO? Sob. Anyway good job

While i was reading this, I didn't get faces with those who were boviously the characters. You know how sometimes in anime they show the head and the nose and mouth but not the eyes (you aren't the only one who rambles) well, that was what i was getting when i read this. But other than the lack of unidentifiable (eyeless) characters, i really like this kind of writing. A shame i can't find more of it on FF.

Srsly, you're good

Flawlessly written; a beautiful piece of literature, so please refrain from such dislike and contempt of it. (:

sad, but i loved it.

I really liked this story. Maybe I'm the crazy one. lol. But making hate synonimous with love isn't that farfetched idea. Isn't there a fine line between love and hate. These emotions can just as easily transfrom into the other.

That was actualy a fairly goos story in my opinion. Keep on writing

hmm, i liked it alot. this felt like something that could be made into one of those black and white silent movies. very interesting :]

nonononononono! it's not bad at all! such a good story...i'm almost sad that it doesn't have more substance, but not much cause it's really good, and the style's good and...i like it! keep writing, buy shonen jump, live life, pineapples are for sponges, carrots are for roosters, and bunnies get towtrucks