Really cool story! I was worried about the OC's, but you incorporated them very well :)

It’s taking an age to get to the bit where the Heir of Merlin comes into the story and the amulet that Harry is wearin, there’s only 12 chapters left and they are very short. Come on give us a good end rewrite if yop have to

This is a nice story.

sorry thus is is really late and you might not come on this anymore, but congrats on your degree im a freshman in highschool and im going to start taking a language over the summer, so far its been hard to even learn a greeting, so its awesome that you got a degree good luck in the future!

so either she has two forms or she's a chimera... nice.

Interesting comparison Harry...is it possible... ;}

I think I see a connection there...

Why has Hermione not gone home for Christmas, she has a mum and dad but every time I read a story there she is. She is always at the Burrow in summer, now Hogwarts in winter, they all stay at Hogwarts during the Easter break. So my question is why is she there ...again...

Oops! "They act like an old married couple" and 'one of these days they would make it official'
Waaaaaaaay to much Ron /Hermione shipping going on, leaving you with... the only thing that makes me wanna' barf- an H/G pairing.

I can read no further.

Pairings really SHOULD be warned. I dont care if JKR does have 20 billion,, or whatever, in the bank. H/G is stupid, nasty, gross, belittling of Harry's intellect, makes him susceptible to Molly's potions and Dumbledore's machinations.
He'll be broke a week after the wedding, and walking around in a love/loyalty potion haze, thinking everything is alright. Ginny will get as fat as Molly, and Harry won't even care.
I guess, luckily, I only had to read four chapters before getting out?!

Wow. (Loudspeakers) "And the award for shortst ever fanfic chapter goes to..."
Good thing I'm reading fifteen years later, huh?!
On to the next paragraph...er, chapter.

Good

Epic!

I don't have anything bad to say about this story per se, because so far it is a good storyline, but I'm finding myself getting bored with it... I'm not sure what could be done to make it better, it's just not holding my attention and I do not have the urge to continue reading just to find out what happens next. Maybe I'll pick back up on it some other time. Maybe I have just read so many Harry Potter fics in general that I'm finally burnt out, I don't know...

Great!Can't wait to read the next chapter !

This chapter was hilarious! Especially the first bit sand the human pretzel!