Very cute. Also rather poignant. Hadn't heard that bit about BB before, and I'm relatively familiar with comic book canon where he's concerned, so I'll have to assume that was backstory you came up with. If so ... nice work.

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cute! 3

Very cool dude. They should put you in a tent at a national park more often...

Oh man! Insanely good! That was... was... so good that I don't even know how to describe it! No. Forget good. IT WAS TOTALLY GREAT AND AWESOME! LOVED EVERY MOMENT OF IT! DEFINITELY MAKE MORE OF THESE!

Aw! This is such a cute story! I love it!

Very cute.

Wow! I dont usually like one shots but this one was actually really good! :-)

That was supper sweet!

stiil some probs wit da spelling (hell, i'm using near text message speak right now), and, you know you coulda let them... you know... actually kiss, right? it would've gotten alot better, methinks, even if everything else did hapn da same. whether or not it woulda gotten more reviews, tho, ( i got probs wit dat meself), i got no idea.

This is cute, I like it.

Very cute! It was good how you put all the details and emotions in them without making them too OOC, I loved it.

Two words...To Cute! Love it, absolutely wonderful. As I said before, minor spelling errors, but other than that, it was perfect.

bbissocute

Very cute! I enjoyed this one-shot very much. And please, give a thank you from me to your cousin as well! Arn't camping trips just so much fun!

Morfindien (aka Morf)

this was really good, but before i get on with the compliments, there are a few things i want to get out of the way. I saw a few misspellings, most noticable being the "board". the word you were supposed to use was "bored". and the "Doom Parole", as you called them, is the "Doom Patrol". And when Starfire couldn't "bridal" her joy, the proper word is "bridle". as in to contain with restraints, or a horse bridle.

now, for the compliments. i liked this a lot. you kept them both in character, and yet in a way not. they were OOC in a good way. Raven, usually, wouldn't confess that kind of thing to anyone, but you made her so that she would, and yet kept her as...well...herself. Beast Boy, too, wouldn't tell anyone that, but you made it so he could and still be him. I especially like your story of the "Abebe crush". quite realistic, and somewhat cute.

but anyway, it was great and i'm glad you wrote it. :D