This was a great fanfic, it was a pleasure to read. I know, on your account it says that its innactive but if you ever return, please write more Moon Child fanfics, because I love Moon Child and you are a talented writer.

Hi, I liked your fic, poor Kei, everything has done by Sho Sho but also has done much to Kei, mainly because I love KeixSho couple are so hot together and make it so good together, notice that you want and that is much needed, although I prefer Sho Kei dominant and submissive, are so hot so, I hope you do more fics of them, well, still thanks and kisses.

This was such a great write! I really enjoyed reading this :)

Your story has captivated me and I was completely addicted! I vote 5 stars! A sequel is now in order I presume you know this? ()ゞ

I loved it. You've managed to keep everyone in character, and the interaction between Sho and Kei were wonderful.

I like the way you had Sho compare himself to a monster. It was quite clever. :D Yay! They gotz together! .

I loved this :)

Such a heart warming, nice read.

OMG. *collaspes* XDD A HAPPY ENDING! :'D Which doesn't really happen often with your stories lol and it's funny because I almost expected a bad ending, so this really took me by surprise and I'm so happy! FINALLY Kei tells him he loves him, homg. DX And at least he won't kill himself, not for awhile. XD Anyway, besides the surprisngly sweet and relieving ending, I will admit I read this ENTIRE story in one night, because, yet again, your story has grabbed me and, if it were in book-form, it was a definite page turner, it was so MARVELOUS and suspenseful and I actually think I would prefer this as the real script for Moon Child compared to what the movie actually was, honest! All of the main themes of the movie were in this, and, like the movie, despite everything that happens everyone turns out okay. :D Except in this case it's a lot better because they aren't all dead lol. But I loved everything about this, your characterization was PERFECT, I love Kei even more and I don't think I'll last without you making more stories, honest. YOU ARE AMAZING. 3 This too definatley goes under best fanfics I've ever read. And thank you for putting in all the random Kei and Luka tidbits, they reminded me of "Through The Ages" and made me smile. And I love the idea of giving Kei a lil box with his memories (He still has the cigarette case! *AW!*) Okay, as it's 3 in the morning, I should be off lol, but again AMAZING SUPERB FABOLOUS JOB with everything and you rock. /end review. XD

I love this! I wanted to cry at the ending

This is an excellent story. I really enjoyed reading it and I hope you write some more :)

That was amazing. It was absolutely worth the wait. Truly, one of the best Moon Child fics in existance. I love it. Do you have any more plans for MC fanfiction? Because if you do, I'll sure as hell read it.

Thanks a lot for this.

NO? THE END? Argh xD my heart's broken.. I know this had to happen one day...

...and it was a happy end after all! Thanks for them! and for us, readers... we all want them to be happy...

(I can't believe it's over... I can't believe it's the end... just can't be... argh I have to read it again NOW)

Ah! You finally updated! OMG! I loved this. It's a perfect ending. Is there gonna be a sequel?

hugs...empath

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! what will kei do now?

ASOTA