to be honest.. ron is eight they did abandon him and they should recognize that

Like the story except for the decrepit 53 year olds... keep waiting for the evil spells that made it happen

I like the premise, but it was a total dick move to just leave, get together, even though Hermione was still with Ron, get married and have a child. It kinda leaves me feeling sour. It'll be interesting to see how it plays out, but any anger Ron feels for his girlfriend ditching and getting together with Harry is fairly justified (as long as it's just anger and not violence). The fact that they haven't communicated in the 4(?) Years that Harry and Hermione have been gone is kinda odd, but acceptable since it's just one of those "given" pieces of the scenario. I noticed that the flow and dialogue is a little awkward at times, but nothing so wrong that I would he able to say its bad. It feels like some of the dialogue would make me think "oh that's kind of odd" if I heard it in real life, but it wouldn't make me inherently think that its the wrong way of saying it. That was overly long winded, sry. Everything else was good. Kudos and keep on writing!

Don’t listen to the haters, I like this story a lot. This is unique and a cute idea!

Brutally bad story.

Really bad.

I don't know if you just had a complete slip of your brain or just don't care... but Hogwarts starts on September 1st EVERY year. There wouldn't be students in the castle on the 30th of August, much less be a Hogsmeade weekend.

Bill and Fleur's first child was born on the 2nd of May of 2000. Teddy was born in 1998. And her name is Victoire, not Victoria. Her name is important to her birthday to her because its the anniversary of the final battle.

I know this review is well after the last update date, so expect it to be taken with a grain of salt. First, I agree with your being able to invoke literary license, or author's prerogative, as it may be, to indicate that Harry was older than Hermione; you stated that at the front and carried through. But, one thing I do not remember seeing was an adjustment to the Hogwarts session schedule. Unless I missed something, you have Harry, Hermione and Andrew visiting Hogwarts/Prof. McGonagall in late August, and her mentioning a class of 7th year NEWT students to get to, when traditionally Hogwarts students don't arrive at the castle until September 1, and start classes on September 2 (Andrew's birthday), if it is a weekday. Unless I missed something, that appears to be a small plot hole.
I just want to say that I have mostly enjoyed this story up to the point that you admitted to start to ramble, and still found it entertaining after that. I do admire anyone who has the imagination and presence of mind to create a cohesive story and carry it through to the end. Thank you.

Nice.
you made a mistake in 4 years h/hr are together and married, elswhere you said there were together for 4 years and 4 years married makes it total 8 years together.
Fleur nows the truth she is an honest woman and a friend of harry's, don't know but would hardly think she wants to be around those 3 weasleys.

There are some mistakes but overall and enjoyable story.

I normally don't review till end of story. Why change Dan and Emma Granger's names? there is no need for it. Dan and Emma are perfectly great names. And I don't think a USA car is legal in England. You would need different car and licence in both countries. They have different requirements.

Absolute garbage, shitty American trying to make UK look bad while in the US there are violence everywhere. England have always been better than the US in almost everything. At least we know how to not shoot each others.

Pretty horrible, boring dreck. 19 chapters of irrational behavior, and non-existent plot movement, and unbelievable occurrences.

Yes, you did butcher this chapter. Honestly, I suspect both of those conditions are not difficult to fix using magical means. Pneumonia really only kills those with weakened immune systems. In other words, those with other diseases, such as AIDS or cancer. Heart disease is an issue, but can usually be treated with changes to diet, exercise, medication, surgical procedures, or outright transplant.