I hope you do get around to writing the sequel soon :)

that was so cool! I LOVED IT! bob the dementor. funny shiz

I liked bob! I want more bob, like for instance why has he taken a liking to Sirius? Has Dobby left Harry's side more for Luna?

hi loving it so far...one small discretion, in the last chapter when Tonks was eating and Remus brought her clothes and all Ginny was upstairs still recovering. However in this chapter she just got back that morning. Could just be I missed something though. Thought I'd let you know anyways. Great chapter.

hi! well I love the combination of Snape, Sirius, Tonks, Dobby, and Luna...and now Narcissa. However as a bit of constructive criticism, it does get a bit confusing at times as far as who's saying what. I do like the over all plot though. Well done.

thumbs up!

no, i really liked the second interlude, très passionnant. that means "very exciting" in French, FYI.

yeah it is a bit short, but very good too, i can't wait to see what happens next.

wait a second so the mafia and the death eaters are different people? i thought they were the same. but they both want harry dead, right? and they both want the prophecy? why are there two different groups then?

ooh the suspense is building...

well that sure could come in advantage...

i don't really have anything to add as your story is so good anyways.

oh yes i love your story very much indeed. very exciting i'd say.

i was going to guess Azkaban really, but know that I think about it, that would be kind of stupid, scratch that extremely stupid. lol. snape's place is way better.

oh, poor Mr. Lovegood...