I really enjoyed this

I have to say that it was interesting to see how your writing has grown since this early effort. While it was mostly well-done, by the end I pretty much hated the characters. Hermione, Ginny and Ron were annoying, and Harry was pretty much a wuss for tolerating their badgering, at least in my opinion.
But the story's redeeming quality was its examination of what the DEs were doing after Voldie snuffed it, and the overall closure. So for that, Thanks for an engaging read.

Maybe just me, but it doesn't make sense to me that restoring Hermione's parents memories would erase their memory of the past year ...

Really good quidditch chapter but every time someone scores, you write 'It sailed through!' or something along those lines which got really REALLY repetitive. Other than that it was good though.

There was once a girl named Ashley Halagey, who had a boyfriend named Jack. Jack was the most popular guy in school. The three most popular girls were Courtney, Ashley and Emma. Jack thought Ashley was OK, but he REALLY liked Courtney. Courtney liked Jack also. Well, of course she did. Everyone did!

Ashley and Courtney were worst enemies. Courtney tried to steal Jack away every time she had a chance. One day, Courtney asked Jack if he wanted to go to the movies. Ashley heard everything. What movie, What movie theatre and what time.

That night, Ashley followed Jack and Courtney to the movie theater. Ashley sat right behind them. she watched them get close to each other and kiss. Not only did they kiss, but they practically got it on in the theater.

Courtney asked Jack, “Do you want to come to my place and skip this boring movie?”

He replied, “Hell, yes!”

Ashley followed them home and peeked through Courtney’s window. Jack and Courtney were messing around and Ashley watched the whole thing.

The next day at school Ashley wasn’t there. For the next few days Ashley didn’t show up. A week later, her mother found her dead in her closet. She had committed suicide because she loved Jack so much. Next to Ashley’s dead body was a note.

It read: “My Dearest Jack, I watched you at the movies and at Courtney’s house and I willCONTINUE to watch you. I never thought you would do something like this to me. I really loved you, Jack. I died for you just like Jesus died for us. Always with you, signed Ashley Halagey.

Please send this link to more than 15 people or Ashley will haunt you and try to kill you because she wants everyone to know about how Courtney betrayed her.

What Ashley Halagey did to one person who did not send this…

One girl was looking through her e-mail and she deleted this message, thinking it was just another silly forward. The next day, she was found dead in her bed. Copy and paste the link to all your friends or you will meet the same fate...

okay

How the hell did that idiot Ron get picked to be Head Boy? He was a terrible Prefect who didn't stand up to his brothers and who always complained about his duties. What did he do to deserve it? Did he earn it by abandoning Harry and Hermione in the tent?

If I were the actual 7th year students, I would file a complaint with the Board of Governors for favoritism and discrimination.

For Fleurs pregnancy: Canon is that Victorie was born on the 2nd anniversary of the war. The way you have written is that she would be due sometime around the 1st anniversary of the war.

i thought this is a ron hermione fanfic :(

Aurors are absolutely NOT allowed to use unforgivable curses. NO, NO, NO! They are unforgivable for a reason. Puts a damper on this story for me.

The Polyjuice potion takes a month to brew, 30 minutes will not make the potion, not even close.

Disconnects from earlier chapter, Rowle didn't die.

"Are you serious"
"No sirius died 3 years ago"

Sorry all these old fanfics ive been rereading made me miss that bit :)

Just noticed mcgonagall is calling Harry harry a lot in this

if you gonna make geogre and verity togther your wrong he's with angelingna johson

Fourth time reading this one. It is great. Love the connections between the charactors. Love your take on after the battle.