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wingwolfly chapter 5 . 1/21 Dang, I don't usually like stories that change the character's personalities too much from the show but man you're good at writing. |
Guest chapter 3 . 6/14/2017 Looks like sonic went in there and gave tails a peiece of his mind. And to be honest, tails kinda deserved that. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/14/2017 I hate this series with a passion |
Singerj199 chapter 5 . 6/6/2017 I've already read this story twice just so I could leave a proper review. I really like how you gave such an in depth view into such an undermined character in the Sat AM universe. It was and is a fantastic analysis of life and behaviors of the characters after the war. The end was definitely 'out there' so to speak but in the best way possible. It is very thought provoking to put yourself in such a disturbing situation that the characters found themselves in and I find myself asking "What would you do?" In that situation. And for that it provides even more entertainment outside of the story trying to picture yourself in a real life rendition of the story. For example when my nephew comes of age how am I supposed to explain why his real daddy ain't around. Very interesting and disturbing ending all together it was great. The character interaction was fantastic again delving into the kind of behavior that goes on behind closed doors in a very scarily realistic way. I can't say that I can picture some of the characters (mainly Tails) veering off on such an extreme tangent but again that's what makes it so interesting and in my personal opinion more realistic to human behavior and logic in the real world. So with that all being said I am very impressed with the story as a whole. The unpredictability and amount of unprecedented ideas is fantastic and very well done. Thanks for the great read and other great stories. Ps if you're reading this and you haven't already make sure to read his story: Reversion. So y'all be good, be safe, and don't kill nobody |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/13/2017 I hate this series already. Especially tails' outburst. |
Scraplord32 chapter 5 . 10/23/2015 Wow. This story was kinda... heartbreaking, in a way. |
Scraplord32 chapter 1 . 10/23/2015 Alright, this is amazing and may be the first fanfic that almost brought me to tears. |
RozeBomb chapter 5 . 10/21/2015 INHUMANE, MOTHERFUCKING AI! |
XxCrimsonShadowxX chapter 5 . 6/10/2014 Well that just blew my mind at the end... Nicole just flipped the entire story over with that twist so hard it hurts to even think about it. Though now I would like to say this was one of the best stories I have read that was centered around the SaTam verse and I loved the way the characters were acting... pure genius. You heir author have just obtained a fav for a great story so now I am off to find more stuff to read with thanks for not stopping at chapter one. |
Sonicshadowandtailsfanforever chapter 1 . 10/16/2013 Nicole showed tails who's boss |
Guest chapter 5 . 10/14/2013 Okay, that was some weird ass shit at the end. But a great story never the less. Some of it was funny, some serios, and it was a combination. Keep it up and don't give up on a story. Too many people have done that. |
Stitchfan 82 chapter 5 . 6/12/2013 This was good up an till the end. If you stopped at chap 4 It could have had a happy ending. I will be sending you a PM as soon as I finish my true response. |
Jareisa chapter 5 . 8/25/2012 This must be the absolute BEST fanfic I have ever read. I'm serious. Your setup was incredibly interesting and intelligent, and the payoff was well worth reading through right to the end. You captured the characters' personalities flawlessly, and I love what you did with the character of N.I.C.O.L.E.! This is, simply put, a great piece of writing. And another thing: your writing style is a joy to read, and your descriptions are so vivid and detailed that I become envious when reading them! Excellent! |
Tenkasen chapter 5 . 1/5/2012 This... This practically played ping-pong with my thoughts and emotions. Tails becomes a brat. - Crap. Tails is forced to face subequent consequences. - Well, the means aren't great, but the intentions are for the right reasons... Sometimes when the gentle approach doesn't work, you have to be tough. Seriously tough... Strained relationships - Ohhh I don't like these well. I worry and hope for it to be fixed. Tail's parents are alive. - Impossible. Seriously? This'll make things worse. Sonic and Tail's argument - Had it coming. Sonic's right, though the truth hurts, and in that state Tail's was in, there was no other way to get it through his skull. Tail's own inner battle between his feelings - Well executed. The reasoning is nicely thought out. Reunion - All ends well. Happy all the way through. Tail's parents actually have been robots this whole time and died many years ago - ...Damn. Didn't see that coming. Such a crucial detail can mean everyting, and lead to something better off not knowing. Cliffhanger - I started laughing, because you had me so entranced with the debate, because I felt strongly for both sides, NICOLES logical approach and Sonic's emotional one, and then you left it hanging with a very hard choice that, if exposed, would screw them both over horribly, left me surprised. I'm amused at that, oddly, because it's not humourous, but I all I could do is laugh and say "That's horrible!", because damn, that was horrible to leave us hanging - and the act of doing so was practically flawless. Well done. |
MyFirstWritingCareer chapter 5 . 9/10/2011 Oh. My. God... That was the most twisted ending ever! Totally unforeseen... I absolutely loved this story. It was totally BRILLIANT! And that ending... Oh, wow! It somehow made the whole story a lot more realistic to me, because doing something like that to Rosemary and Amadeus is totally up Robotnik's alley. Yeah. That ending left me totally conflicted emotionally. While it seemed positively twisted, it seemed like... I don't know. I just liked it and was disturbed by it at the same time. Wow... Just wow... Okay, in summation, BRILLIANT story, inspired, twisted, great, somewhat disturbing ending. So, yeah... You're a great writer! |