I would really like it if you come back to this story please. I wanna know what happens! More please so much more!

? Why did you stop writing this storyline? It's a good one. You should continue it.

I like ur story really wish u would updates.

I LOVE IT, KEEP WRITING PLZ, do not give up PLZ.

I love this what happens? Let me know asap plz.

Wht happens next _ how did V end up married to Duncan

So sad to this story is not finished.

Please update soon!

another great story, hope you update soon :)

i love it. please update soon. The only thin I wanted to suggest you have already written about it in this chapter so/

not liking the thoughts i'm having of what duncan did!

so is little keith logan's son or did he kill that baby?

pms now please!

nice chapter, just waiting for the next update now :) can't wait

Holy Crap! I loathe Duncan. This story is really good. I'm so intrigued with all the questions of paternity and what the hell happened in the past. The flashbacks are well done and explain the story better. Love the LoVe Hate the Donut. Update quickly.

Christy

i have a little thought little keith is logan and veronica's or duncan killed or got rid of via adoption their child, cant wait till the next chapter update soon

This was a good chapter. So is little Kieth Logan and Veronica child or something? What did Duncan do to Veornica? Is Lily Duncan and Meg's child then? This is a really good chapter. Please continue and if you can please do not makes us wait a long time for the next chapter if possiable.

wow, this story of yours is really really great and

I hope you will update soon!

I am glad that Logan came to the rescue...and the

epic goes on...

actually I am a peaceful being but if Duncan had really

drugged and abused Veronica over years and telling her

she had kids, then he deserved the punches, ha ha ha,

oh and he should get arrested, but there are the poor

kids right?

Please write longer chapters and update soon,

I send you my invisible maid for hous cleaning and

homework and anything she can do for you so you

have more time to write!