I swear it, this story was epic. Too beautiful, just perfect.
Dammit, Balthier x Ashe was such a perfect pairing! *squee!*
And this was my most favorite Balthier x Ashe story from you. :D

Hope you didn't find this creepy (lol), but I've been grinning like a lunatic since I started to read your Balthier x Ashe fanfics. XD They're just so good! I love them so damn much.
Thanks for these amazing stories. :DDD

Thats was an amazing dual story, I enjoyed both and was kind of wishing the in story book was an actual book I could read some time.

I wonder if Balthier quoted any line from the love scene that existed in those last twenty pages ;)

But, one of favorite stories on fanfiction and it made me smile very much.

Thanks!

great story, wheree did u get the idea of "through the sands" very well written:) im glad that u didnt drag this story out you ended it perfectly. I cant wait to read more of your stories. Keep up the good work! xx

That was amazing! I must admit, i was really wondering what was happening in the book (Through the Sands to You) near the end. It was wonderful, and i love the way you finished the stories.

The wording of your works, all of them, are beyond words. They envoke emotion so vividly and so beautifully, painting it as a whole, the good and the bad, into one spectacular mural. Few authors I have ever had read have the capability to pen in such an elequent fashion. You know your characters and their emotions throughtly, and it seems nothing you do is thrown together or hastily written. You take your time and it takes the shape of something indescribable. Your love for imagination and the pride of your works irefutably shines through. Have you published anything Professionally? I would love to see a novel written by you at the bookstore.

I absolutely loved this piece! Both stories kept me intrigued. Beautiful. Thank you very much!

From me to you, let me say that I don't often review, because I rarely find stories that earn it. And when I do review, I usually find a way to be cordial and well-spoken. That said...

THAT WAS FREAKIN' EPIC. YOU'RE DOING IT RIGHT.

I love it! You've lain it out perfectly, to allow you the best execution, and the reader the best experience. What I am most impressed by is your sentence variation, which is a tricky science and one rarely attempted in most stories I read. You've quite nearly mastered it, so hats off to you!

For con-crit, there is one or two parts where I find Ashe or Balthier to be a bit out of character, and some of the sentences could be tightened, but altogether a solid and very enjoyable story!

My favorite parts are when Fran gives the book to Ashe in the library (clever, skillful Fran; her appearance is short, but you keep her well in character), and Balthier's real reason for being ashamed about his glasses.

Splendiferous! Wonderful! A joy! Welcome to my super-exclusive favorite authors list. Feel special, you're one of the only two authors on the entire site I've liked enough to add!

Keep writing!

M'gana (formerly Genetix Chiquita)

This is such a beautifully laid out story. The transitions between the book and the events in their lives were so smooth - I admit, I was doubtful at first but certainly no more. You are such an amazing writer, every sentence had me drawn in and from beginning to the last line this story was a beauty. I really wish there was more I could say. I loved this story and I love your writing style; that's really all it boils down to.

Amazing. Such a wonderful clever story! You are a talented writer :)

shot. Ever. The way you weaved the two stories together was the aboslute pinnacle of the entire story, and you did it absolutely amazingly. I applaude your skills. :D

Beautiful writing (as usual). This was a great fic to read on a Saturday morning :)

No words. Prob one, if not THE one best fanfic of XII of Ashe and Balthir. Simply amazing.

this is, quite possibly, the cutest, most original BalthierAshe fanfic I have ever read. you wrote Balthier's personality perfectly, and the flirting between him and Ashe was adorable. the way you fit the book into the story was amazing. loved it!

Girl, you have a brilliant mind. It was simply amazing! Every fic you've written has left me in complete awe, and I think you portray Ashe and Balthier's characters perfectly. Keep up the good work!

Totally at a loss for words. Completely. I can't even form coherent thoughts, no less sentences...

Why is everything you write so GOOD?

I wish that was a real book - you should write it, heehee. :) I'm sure it would be fantastic. Sure, everyone'd know the ending, but that's not the point, you know? We'd get to hear descriptions of Llanditia that just leapt off the page... read about Orande and Al-Fehr... go on, do it! Write it! You know you want to! :D

All right, all right, fine, back on track... this was arguably the cutest Balthier/Ashe one-shot I've ever read.