I Will now cry for the rest of the night

oh man, i cried real tears! that was sad

'Oh my gosh, Oh my gosh, Oh my gosh, Oh my gosh, Oh my gosh, Oh my gosh. NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! NO,NO,NO.' I kept repeating this as I cried slightly

O..M..G... that just made my list of the top ten fanfictions i've ever read. it was kinda short but amazing i cried so hard...it was so sad but kinda sweet in a hopeful kinda way 3

This is a great story and i cried at the end you have a wonderful gift of writing this story and it is going into my faviorts thank you for putting it up again great story

...oh my GOD. I ACTUALLY feel like crying right now. It takes a LOT to do that, believe me. NO! PIE! LANCE! YOU CAN'T DIE!

And THAT is exactly what makes this fic so good. Because everybody else (Well not EVERYBODY, but thw majority) does a really happy ending, Lance and Pietro get together, have sex etc. I think the admission and the inderlying tones are the best thing about this.

Oh...Poor Lance. I felt so sorry for him!

I couldn't type this review for several minutes because I couldn't see due to the fact that your writing is so beautiful and so moving that even now that I have stoped crying just enough to be able to type, the tears are still flowing. I have read many sad fics. I have read a lot of death fics. I have read a lot of fics in general. Not one before this had made me cry before. Not one, not ever.

Please keep writing so I and others may continue to be amazed by the depths you reach.

Several years later, I read this fic again and I am just almost crying. I WOULD be crying if it weren't for the fact that I'm in a public place. Granted, I shouldn't be reading fan fiction in a public place but, well, here I am. My body is just shaking and my eyes are blinking back tears. I was GLUED to my screen. I am literally fighting back tears and sniffling. Seriously. INCREDIBLY emotional. Your writing is absolutely breath taking. My throat has that sharp-achey feeling when it's tightening to help fight back tears. This story has just made my heart want to vomit itself out through my chest and land in a bloody puddle on the table in front of me. You could seriously make a person not want to live anymore with this. The writing is phenominal. I COULD NOT tear myself away. I just could not stop reading it. Hooked, obsessed, I had to finish it. Years later and I STILL worship your writing. I wish I could write like you do, and I furthermore wish you still wrote. I don't think you fathom how fantastic you are. I don't think you realize how this story effects people. I don't know what else to say except this is bitterly sad, gorgeously surrealy sad and that I idolize you.

Damn, now you've got me cryin. Wonderful story, the ending was beautiful.

Congrats...you made me cry. Wonderful fic, angst is harder to write properly then people think.

**sob** that waz so beautiful and so depressing...**sigh**

..im crying...its 12:32 am and im sobbing...that was good..but very very sad

cool more please

that's so sad, but amazing. it was beautifully written. i luved it.

T_T

Please excuse me while I go bawl my eyes out.