Now that I've also read chapter 2 I can say that this is really one of the best Chrono Cross fics I've read so far! Fics of such a high quality are rare and it's about Kid and Harle, my two favourite characters (yes, I like both of them)in Chrono Cross! This fic definetely goes to my favourites list! It saddens me that you probably aren't going to add another chapter anymore...But if you ever add another chapter to this story, then I will definetely read it too!

Wow, This is an absolutely amazing fic! So far I love it! It's so truly complex, deep and unique and the language you use in this fic is so descriptive and evocative! I'm not sure if Kid really merged with Schala in the Chrono Cross ending (a lot of Chrono Cross players seem to assume this) but I guess it's a possibility that could have happened...Of course I'm going to read chapter 2 too...This fic is so fascinating!

This is a really cool story. The paradox is that there might be a continuation to the rest of the story. The fact is there isn't yet. Well you get what I'm saying.

oh pleeeez continue! i love this fic!

(I'll try to be as objective as possible, but i tell ya it won't be easy.)

This fic is well written. It's rare that I see a fic that I *like*, and this is one of them. The conflict... the story practically screams out to the reader. It's kinda reminiscent (did i spell that right?) of Cloud in the Lifestream, though, but that doesn't harm the story.

I really hope that you continue this fic.

This is AWESOME. I love the inner diolauge and how it's written... the twists, the turns... and of course the paradox of Kid/Schala's existance. GREAT job!

Wow, Mess, I never knew you wrote Chrono Cross fics! (Yes, folks, I know Mess already.) This is... wow. Mind-boggling stuff here.

Poor Kid and Harle. And there's still the mystery of where Serge has gotten off to... You know, I want to see more of this.

Until next time!

I love this Kid Fics especialy if they question her past and her being Schala...Anyway I loved this fic...Is there any sequel

Wow. Great characterization. Very well told. Very well written.

I thought this was a great piece! I'm new to the fan-fic field, but I love these games, and this is a good story anyway. It still needs to resolve, though, so just keep at it.

That was amazing. I hope that you write more of it, it's one of the best Chrono Cross fics I've read

This was...unbelievably awesome. Definitely one of my all-time favorite fics. I can't wait for the rest.

You know, when it actually hurts when your eyes hit the end of the story, you know it's a work of great art. Get into professional writing, this is some truly incredible stuff.