Love it! If only TK really had said Taichi was the leader of the Digidestined.

I gots one word for yous... LOVES!

i loved it

the end was hilarious plz write more to this

Ahaha! Brilliant! I love Daisuke's logic!

omg i love it plz continue soon un

*laughs so hard she has a chair malfunction*

That...was..the coolest thing ever!

You do appear to be mentally retarded. This is NOT CRAP! And as a matter of fact, I believe the characters fit those of the actual show (well, ignoring the yaoi, they don't do that in the show :P), so that makes the story much better.

Constructive criticism? Um ... write more?

that was really good but write more chapters and put some lemon in it and have dai pop the question

It's not Yaoi. It's Slash. Slash is a fan made couple of two characters that aren't together in the anime/manga/book/show/movie/etc.

But it was still cute. :) Daikeru is my favorite.

"OMG! They were GAY! U sicko!" Lol, just kiddin'. I know how annoying reviews like those are. They piss me off too. Really bad...anywho, I'm only reviewing cuz this fic was exceptionally cute. For a first yaoi, it was pretty damn good, I'd say. It wasn't too corny or cutesy, which is something that happens a lot with first-timers. The whole intro of it and Hikari trying to force Takeru into a dress was hilarious. The end of it was the best part, I think. The dialogue was just so clever.

"If I say that MY trcuk engine's dead, then the goddamn engine is dead, right?" Just totally clever. Nice job!

I found this story quite well done and written! I've liked those gentles touches of sarcasm in your sentences, your narrative is lively and dinamic, perfectly suited for the situation presented in your story. The dialogues were also well done, you've captured Daisuke's character almost perfectly. I mean, well this is exactly how I see him.

My only complaint would be the lack of dialogues in the firt part of the story. I think you meant that as an "introduction" I suppose, and your story's core is the last part with the dialogues . I might be wrong of course, but this is how it seemed to me. Well, if it's an introduction then I think it turned out to be a little too long I guess.

So lastly, a very good effort, nicely built-up story, perfect dialogues and characters! Keep writing! ;)

OMG i loved the whole story , every thing about it , the part with Patamon and Gatomon betting , and poor Daisuke traying to make the date prfect and going to cenima to find Matt and Tai , and Matt sett Garurrumon on Dai ? lol , and thats a great idea getting lost on the way home , and the ending was great Daisuke getting on the top of Takeru and asking his these qestions , that was a great fict i hope you write more Daikeru soon :)