(sniff sniff) That was so awesomely sad! You rock!

this is almost the first Severus story that ive read that was well-written. i love it!

~Serindraxx~

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that was nice :)

i you should write more sev/lily

loved it to pieces... please do write more sev/lily, and sev/lily fics can never be happy. the entire relationship between them boils down to guy likes girl, girl likes guy as friend, guy and prat fight, guy insults gil, prat likes girl, girl marry's prat out of spite, guy gives girl to dark lord, dark lord kills girl & family, guy regrets actions, guy tries to protect prat jr., guy dies to save prat jr.

confusing and heartbreaking, isnt it?

Aw that was cute )

Great write! I have a similar story, though it isn't set during Snape's dying moments. I love this whole idea of Snape trying to be good and do the right thing for Lilly and you've written this beautifully. Great job!