This amazing please make another one

Aw, I never ever considered these two as a couple before, but that was really cute and sweet. I can almost see it happening :)

I never much cared for Jean/Scott or Jean/Duncan so this makes for interesting consideration.

Anyway, I liked this story a lot. Thanks for writing it.

Aw, this is way too adorable. I'd like another.

Gosh I really do love this story. Your writing is fantastic and this idea is very fresh (even though this was back in 07 lol) Def gonna be reading more of your stories :)

K.G.

I enjoyed this immensely. Toad is such a cute character in X-Men: Evolution. I loved this interaction of Toad and Jean.

aw! how sweet ] I think this would make a good series whether short or long, I'll keep you on my alerts anyway D

Great work!

Wow. Strange as hell, but... Awh damnitall it was sweet! and cute! I liked it, lots!

I've never seen this pairing, but I like it. Your description of Todd's wonderful... The guy can be slime, and he can be sweet, and you capture both sides through the eyes of a very confused Jean.

Loved reading this!

I really enjoyed reading this, even if it is a strange couple. Jean seems the type to make friends with everybody, no matter what clique they're in, and so hey... it's possible.

My favorite part?

"She just wanted to know if someone had truly liked her back then, when Scott had been unaware that she was female and Duncan was only a crush. Back when she'd truly felt invisible and moronic."

I liked that. :)

It was great! Loved it.

love it is is nice

and the way he talks in this story reminds me of a crush of mine (old crush...kinda)

So CUTE! You should definitely consider adding to this fic - I'd love to read more! :D

Aw... This is so sweet! I loved it!

And don't aorry about the 'oddness' of the pairing. I didn't mind one bit! I like seeing the couples no one's ever concidered before! -

Keep up the great work!

A very different read. I really like it alot. Hope to read more.