Aw~ that was short but cute :) I liked the ending

This Was A Very Cute And Touching Story! Thank You for Writing It! :)

That was nice. warm and oddly soothing. Great atmosphere and absolutely love gene and mel. Thanks

chow for now:)

Aw! I've read this story before but I'm glad that I marked it so I could re-read it! I can only hope for more...

It's sweet, even if the title is a bit off in my opinion.

it was so cute! I'm really glad they didn't do anything nasty.

I've been wanting to read a good Outlaw Star fanfic, and this is exactly what I've been longing for. It's so well written I wouldn't doubt you to be a published and professional author. Thanks so much for the delightful read!

Aww! I loved it :) I just watched the rest of Outlaw Star! I wish that there was more :( Oh well! This was too CUTE! And sweet and a bunch of other stuff! :D

Heaven and Earth

It's been so long since I've read an Outlaw Star fic and this piece was so sweet. Wonderful story. I really enjoyed it.

aw that was sweet

That was one of the sweetest ficlets I have ever read. I'm favoriting it. Good work.

aw, it was kinda funny wen he said “I have . . . bad habits, Melfina.

that was realy good you should write more but dont make it into a wicked epic, it was well writen i liked it gene and mel are realy cute.

love it! totally faves! this is my favorite anime and i just love mel and gene! so cute, can't wait to see more!

This story is beautiful, there needs to be more stories like this on here. It was so touching and in character... Great! Loved it :)