Bravo, a very powerful and moving story.

Great story! Awesome job!

Go Nathan good job

Interesting story.

Awesome. Watchin' the Pilot right now, but I'll catch the rest of your stuff later. Catch ya on the flip side.

How sad. You have got me hook.

Wonderful! Brilliant! Such emotion, such power; there's so much in this chapter I wanted to cry and kill Lucas's dad big time...but I guess I'm supposed to feel that way _

I injuries might have been a bit over dramatic, as in those punches were a bit much. Maybe half the violence would have accomplished the same effect without making the violence seem excessive, but that's just my opinion.

Good work!

Ohh poor Lucas!

But a good story!

Hope u write some more like this with Lucas!

Cool story and all, but isn't Lucas alittle OOC?

I liked this... I'm curious about why every one has had Lucas as abused... but then it has been a while since I last watched the show, so I could be confused... Very good though...

This is very sweet. though I've never heard of, or seen/watched/read seaquest, this is poignant and well written.

That was a really good story. It explains in good detail everything that happened and made way for a lot of new stories. Good writing, keep it up.

Awwww, that was so sweet! Well, the ending, the story wasn't sweet, but it was well written. Good job.