Hate Sam. He deserved to be traumatized since he goes on to traumatize so many others.

“I'm not going to let that happen, Sam." Dean leveled his gaze at Sam. "I swear to God, I'm not going to let Robbie near you again."

"I know you won't, Dean."

Notice that Sam doesn’t say he’ll protect Dean. It’s because Sam doesn’t care.

Sam doesn’t care or respect Dean, and never does for the rest of the show.

We all know Robbie meant to shoot James, just like Sam meant to shoot Dean, leave Dean in H***, abandon him for Ruby, pummel Dean until death, yada yada.

“It had been almost a year ago now, and it was an accident”. Yah, but Sam’s hate and resentment of Dean isn’t an accident.

Wow. That's an awesome piece of work. Great plot, wonderfully written, creepy character. I enjoyed myself very much. Thank you.

I like this, I'm off to find the sequel

I am loving this story but there's only one thing and youve probably had this commented before. The story says James was killed ten years ago but he would now be 25, however he was 17 and then the story said it was eight years ago the incident happened. So was it when it was eight years ago or ten? Apart from this I am loving this story and the angst to come

OOOOOOOOOOOOOH cliffhanger ending! Oh my goodness I'm so excited there's a sequel! I loved that story as a whole- normally I prefer reading fics that are under 10,000 words, but oh my goodness I couldn't stop reading this one! If was so well written, and just... wow. I mean, humour in all the right places, horror and suspense in all the others- this whole story was just fantastic. I guess I'm just going to slow clap it out. Congratulations on being fabulous and writing an amazing story :D

Oooooooooh I'm actually loving this so much! I love how its really three dimensional- not just the brothers on a case, but the case has backstory, and then there's Robbie, who also has backstory- just wow. You're awesome and I love your writing- can't wait to see where the story goes!

Liked this story a lot and like the sequel!

I like the story but the situation with Sam is too unbelievable. Even with his hands tied he would be able to disarm a civilian with a knife unless it was at his throat the entire time and he wouldn't let someone get the drop on him if he was behind a door. I could also get Dean's reluctance to believe the worst of Robbie in the first few chapters but after Sam went missing? There is no way Dean would be that gullible. The story itself is good but you are way off with the characterization.
I'm not saying this to flame you, it's more like constructive criticism because the writing itself is good.

This was a great story! You're a very good writer and the plot was extremely interesting. I never got boring, it was never too repetitive, it gave the right amount of information without going overboard or being underwhelming and you tuned in to Dean and Sam's characters nicely. It honestly felt like I was watching an actual episode (except reading it haha). I definitely plan on reading more of your stories :)
-Amanda

it was great thanks.

Congrats! You've been rec'd at the spn_littlebro community on Livejournal!

WOW!

This is amazingly well written and in character. Very impressive!