FYI, I found this because of a comic a friend of yours did based on it on DevArt.

This is a really nice story! I like the way the characters interact.

As for your 'bad English' comments—it's not that bad! I've read stories written by people who speak English as a first language, but have grammar much worse than yours!

Keep writing! _

Ironically, you have a better grasp of the English language than many English speaking people I know. Anyway, it was a very good story, although I don't think it realy belongs on the list of Humour...

-super loud squeal- I LOVE YOU! That was so damn good your english is really good, I had no problms reading it Aw george and fred~~ -sig- what a sweetly sad story ~ I totally loved it w I dont know what to say but THANK YOU! -cheers- fred saved george from suciding, so cute -sniff- Beats up jk rowling doll -fumes- I am still really pissed off at her -.- This fic was good therapy for me too This review is so random XD

Your very first english fic and I can say for sure it is worth at least 5 thumbs up! Awsome fic Talk to you soon

-HUGS-

Kuro

Your english was PERFECT. :) The story really made me less sad. Though I don't think I'll EVER accept the fact JK killed Fred. In my mind, it all feels like a really really bad fanfiction. Awesome story, very well written. Thumbs up!

Let's make you quite happy.

I have no idea why I post this in english... maybe because I've been writing in english all day.

It's really good, I really liked it. And I love that you have put my idea in your fid, you made the comic a lot more easier to do.

I would like you to put a link to the comic... so people could watch it, thank you.

The "fight" between the twins is great, when Fred calls George a coward... that hit me, it's really cool.

Keep writing these things girl