Just let the bitch drown o.- her survival instincts and intelligence have gone down the drain. If she won't listen to reason, sit back and watch the show. Save the bitch before she drowns, using Alchemy, but before that, let the bitch get scared and utterly terrified. Maybe she'll smarten up and listen to sense then. Then turn around and say 'This wouldn't have happened if you just listened! I am not responsible for you. If you want to act like a stubborn, obstinate child, then so be it. You'll be treated like a child.'

oh my gods (PJO fangirl) it's ADORABLE! omg! omg! omg!

Wow, cool Edwin story... been looking for some good ones :D

Love it!

Cute :3

aww! this was sooo sweet! u did an amazing job writing this!

this was really good, I loved it 3

That was hilarious. I actually had to stop reading because I was laughing so hard. Torturing Ed is just too much fun, isn't it?

Aww, so fluffy and warm! It just snowed out here in Virginia, so reading this story was twice as great!

It was all happy and cute and fluffy and good. Thats a lot of ands but still very true. Some words are stuffed together like edinhaled ed inhaled but other than that it was superb

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i was impressed.

That was an awesome story! It had wonderful fluff and realistic characters! Great job!

This is so cute! You got their personalities and dialogue down perfectly. I can totally see this happening. It's not EdWin without some adorable playful banter! :P

Aw, this was really sweet, great job! Haha, your comment at the end made me laugh XD It is a little sad that your idea of "being nice" includes giving them frost bite.

this makes me want to go ice skating...

but anyway, it was really good, not much bad grammar or anything like that.