So a head of house sees Snape, another supposed head of house, literally assault a student and just what... does nothing?

I think you're trying too hard to make Harry seem bullied here mate.

Grindelwald whent to dumstrang

I enjoyed your story and am glad that there is a sequel...too many time a promised one (from other authors) isn't there! This was intelligently written and quite nerve wracking! ;) Don't know why I worry about pretend people...must be the great characterizations, eh?

Thinking about family magics. If the ability to speak many languages is a Crouch thing, could Justin's Voice be a family magic returned?

I actually start to really hate it when authors pour so much venom and frequency into their manipulation plots. It reminds me too much of the crap real life has to offer. And, as the reader, I am just as unable to rectify the situation! Sigh. That said, I truly hope you let Harry see the truth of Dumbles AND his friends.

You would think that Pomfrey would be able to detect a with her experience dark curse like what Quirrel did to Harry with her experience from the first war...

Arg! Pins and needles! Oh, I so want Dumbles to get his!

Please tell me that Harry learns of the Machiavellian mind of Dumbles and what he has done so far!

I've come a 'little' late to the party...that said, I'm enjoying your story. :)
As you intimated, I hope Harry will soon see through Dumble's and other's manipulations! Go gettum, Harry!

Great job

crises or crisis?

Before I give my opinion, I want to say that this is a very well written and intriguing story. However, I feel you're giving too much thought thought to things. There doesn't have to be an agenda for every action taken. Is there no one at hogwarts just to go to school?

I like this story a lot, but the idea of italicizing magical things is only a good idea when used sparingly, as it can become messy when used too much. And yes, I know this story’s discontinued..

Lmao

This sucks. End it all, please.

Just from this chapter alone, I know you're a fucking idiot.

I hate Dumbledore as much as the next guy, but this takes the stupid cake.

Delete this garbage.