Love this story, very well written! I especially like the exchanges between Alanna and George.

Alanna's (harassment) training of Neal is very fun to read! Great story

I like the story, parts are funny parts are sad, interesting

There's no point asking, really, but PLEASE continue?

This chapter is hilarious

Lol, some of the chapters are so funny!

Love it.

Love this story! It's so funny and I love how thick and naive Neal is and how blunt Alanna is. The characters work so well together to make it funny.

heehees. I loved this story. The first seven chapters had me busting a gut trying not to lol- loudly I might add. The eigth chapter was sweet and touching and sad, and if I was logged on right now I'd add you to my fav authors list... remind me to do that... later. You are awesome! write more!

Are you going to update this story again sometime soon? Please?

I just rediscovered it, and re-read the whole thing. It's good, fun, light-hearted reading. The bit about Neal not knowing George's line of work is a bit out from cannon, but that's ok with me. Please update soon!

Ha ha. Funny once more. Don't know what else to say. Oh yeah- Neal's so thick with some things.

Now I know why this fic stood out in my head. It's Neal's "pouring" concept. I've read this fic before, OMG! And Thayet comes in the next chapter, right?

Maybe I will read your A/G fic sooner than I thought!

Geeorge! *confetti* & gold coins ;)

I don't know what you were worried about. I think you've Neal and Alanna worked out right. Neal is IC :)

And *squee*! I think I already adore this fic. The dialogue is just flowing. It's wonderful!

AHAHAHA!

Absolutely Brilliant! i love this story! i reread it today after such a long time! keep up the great work!

do you plan on continuing this?