PLEASE DEAR GOD MAKE THIS A FULL BLOWN STORY!

Wish this was not a one shot

I really enjoyed this story. I usually don't like Hermione and Harry together as I believe they have a brother sister relationship. But I loved this story. It was quite beautifully written.

You can't write a better affair story than this. It's simple, clean and very good.

Perfect!

I'm sorry but I couldn't see past the fact that Rose is some kind of creep who gets her jollies off of watching others people memories, that's just sick.

Omg so pure and true
Thanks for writing and sharing. Please keep updating

Be cautious about things such as content and legalities, but you've very talented.

that was a great story nice job
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Well isn't Rose a naughty girl. Invading Harry's memories like that. Guess she's lucky mummy pulled her out when she did. There is understanding they're in love and your real father, and then there is seeing it happen. Scarring.

This was superbly written. I was drawn in throughout the entire thing. I loved the characterization of Harry, Hermione and Rose. I always find myself saddened at the end of these fics, at knowing they are putting everyone else ahead of themselves. But there is s small glimmer in it that makes me hope for someday.

well, this certainly is depressing... interesting and Original, but really depressing.

THAT was good no great for a Harmione fanfic :)

The last lines made me tear up so bad, especially the silent message glance. Great story! Thanks for writing this.

Thanks for posting this.

Interesting and realistic