Reviews for Turnabout Ice Cream
EvilMarshmallow13 chapter 3 . 8/24/2007
This chapter was good. I loved the Judge swimming part, and Gumshoe's insulting Meekins. The chapter was a little vague...not so much that no one could figure out what was going on, but vague. But that's probably because the trial fics/parts usually have testimony. You found a way to get around having to type all that (with the 3 defense attorneys totally pwning Meekins) but, as a result, the chapter was vague. Maybe the next witness should have a little testimony? Also, the characters interacted less than the other chapters-once again, because they're in the trial. Perhaps to add some interactiveness (if you wanted to), you should put in a part where the defense is completely floundering, and they have some moments where they're aguing with eachother, while the prosecution is going through the exact same thing (except loud, on behalf of Oldbag)? But you pulled off the EdgeworthxEma thing marvously well. The part where she kissed him was done in a way that fits the story, so it made sense. Spelling/grammar wise...excellent! I couldn't notice any problems. Anyways, 9/10, for the vagueness.
EvilMarshmallow13 chapter 2 . 8/19/2007
This chapter was even funnier than the last one! You switched between the different characters and their defense (or prosecution, in Oldbag's case) very well. No confusion, just hilariousness. Ema seemed slightly OOC...she doesn't usually talk that much, even around Edgeworth. Mia...well, that wasn't OOC, just strange (but still funny). 9.7/10, for Ema's slight OOCness.
aIbicans chapter 2 . 8/18/2007
I really liked this XD I think it was the randomness O_o But it's really funny XD Update soon~ I shall wait~
Vaxl chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
The ferarri part reminded me of in Yu Yu Hakusho, during the Chapter Black saga, Yusuke's on his bike trying to catch up to some people, and they how a picture of a guy in a really good car going really fast, and the people pass by the normal people.. The guy driving is like "I swear that's a one time only thing! He must have one good engine!" Then Yusuke passes them... Ther Normal driver of teh smoke'd car says "I got smoked by a guy on a bicicle! O.O"

Funny! .
EvilMarshmallow13 chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
This. Was. HILARIOUS! I was laughing throughout the whole thing! I don't know which part I like better-the Mia/Maya thing that confused Nick, the part where they can't catch up to the ice cream truck in the Ferrari (maybe Larry supercharged the ice cream truck's engine?), the part where Edgeworth, Nick, and Mia say who their defending and Oldhag gets pushed off the cliff, or the part where we learn that Grossberg's saying is "SUPER SIZE ME!". But anyways-I couldn't see any typos/gramatical errors, the plot was mainly sturdy (perhaps you should try to fit in how Maya got the Ferrari) and easy to follow, and it was funny yet believeable. 10/10.