Oh my god, I love this.

Fun story. rating might be wrong, if you're politically correct. Nothing really happens though - it's good writing. In fact I think you keep the action clean enough for k. It beats endless blood and gore for kids.

OMG! This was just epic. Arguably the best Ran/Shinichi OS I've read so far :D
Keep up the good work :)

Change the rating now. NOW.
Oh wow Ran.

Is the rating correct for this story ?

I don't think this is K. But Shinichi was pretty mean to not realize that Ran was already joking about her being with the postman.

that's a great way to get a man's attention.. nothing but an apron.. lmao

Haha, totally something shinichi would do! Great story..

WOAH. You can seriously write a lemon for this story. Hahaha. Nice story anyways :)

This was amazing!So I should try this trick...hehe..._

Wow, Ran. I've read some pretty bad DC seduction fanfics, wow this one was good. HOT.

LOL THIS IS AWESOME!

Ahh...website doesn't want to work though...has too many ads... I can't even view that page :(

But it's okay I guess, with such a err...descriptive fic I'm sure I'm not missing TOO much (though I would love to see the picture).

Lol evil Ran is always great, I really love her personality with a bit of spunk xD. Shinichi's reaction was just priceless! Wonderful work!

-kirite

wow! i love this story tho i think you should continue..or make more like this one! great job!

Nice story, I enjoyed reading this. So so naughty how Ran got our detectives attention. Nice style and writing.

- Yuki

HAHA amazing!