Ah! I remember this! You called me and told me to look at it and that was when I didn't like fanfic. : [ God, its been so long. We used to be so close. That was an awsome summer.

Go over it with spell check and grammar check, for adding comma's and such.

Did you even proof read? It seems as if you just wrote it, decided it was good enough, and posted it.

The pairings of Ryan and Gabriella, and Troy and Sharpay are cool, that's who should be together.

This story has the potential of being an entertaining, cute story. You know, not the best, but if you really proof read it, this could be better.

Oh, and it's nice that your 'decatating' this to Molly. Too bad that isn't even a word, I mean it'd be nice if you were 'dedicating' this to her, but I guess decatating should be good, too...

Please, for the sake of all who stumble upon this, fix it.

~mrc22

This is a great story! I love it! Thank you!

Okay this is so sad I have to review on my own story but fine! I love this sotry keep writing and ill keep reading!