| Reviews for One Year In The Feudal |
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   TakahashiGurl chapter 38 . 2/11/2013 WOAHHHH! BABY! now that's crazy |
| TakahashiGurl chapter 18 . 2/11/2013 Lol he is such a baaaad dog! |
| Skittles chapter 53 . 11/24/2011 hahahah, Ikuto like from Shugo Chara:b |
| kouga's older woman chapter 53 . 4/30/2011 Nice ending! I'll miss it! |
| Brandy Jay chapter 1 . 4/29/2011 I was going to read this story, but within the first few lines you've managed to completely put me off. You make more grammatical errors in one sentence than most people make in a middle school english paper. A few pointers for your future stories: 1. Names of people are to be capitalized. This is learned in elementary school. 2. Spell check is a friend, use it wisely. 3. Spell check cannot help if you use the wrong word, such as "where" for "we're" as you did in the very sentence of your story. 4. Consider getting a smarter friend or family member to read over your chapters before posting them, they may be able to point out errors you didn't see. |
| inuyashahanyou4kagomemiko chapter 52 . 4/28/2011 Omg! Soooo gooood ! Update soon ! |
| kouga's older woman chapter 52 . 4/28/2011 I'm hooked! Need more! |
| kouga's older woman chapter 51 . 4/26/2011 I love this story! Keep it coming! What is it? |
| Abby chapter 6 . 3/1/2010 inuyashas has been spending to much time with miroku , cause of what happened at the end... |
| Mm chapter 50 . 12/28/2009 Please write more I need to know wat happe |
| This-Reminds-Me-Of-A-Puzzle chapter 50 . 7/19/2009 To lazy to sign in. You suck! I don't like your story! In fact this is the worst thing I have ever read. Do you not know how to type a story, you write like an amateur. I mean your still stuck in play writing. Since when was this a good idea: “I burnt his sleeve”Shippo “Why?’Sango “He wouldn’t tell me”Shippo “Oh well inuyasha’s egos to big anyway I guess he thought it didn’t need bosting”Sango “Huh? I don’t get it”Shippo “You don’t need to”Kagome To answer the question never. Also please learn real grammar, it's a pain reading this when I keep looking at third-grade grammar. If you make me mad I'll stock this story and keep flaming you. I suggest you get rid of this story because it's horrible and amateur. Please learn to write or just go jump off a cliff and make us all happy. If i could go back in time and stop myself from reading this i would but I can't so instead I shall flame you. Also I'm quite happy you ran out of ideas, what were you thinking when you wrote this. You weren't thinking that's why you wrote this piece of trash. |
| Moonstone212 chapter 30 . 5/10/2009 ARE YOU GONNA MAKW KAGOME GO WITH KOAGA! ) |
| Moonstone212 chapter 27 . 5/10/2009 Yes you are evil. But thats what we love you sbout you! _ Tee-Hee |
| Moonstone212 chapter 25 . 5/10/2009 Souta showed him a dimaond ring! 3 |
| Moonstone212 chapter 9 . 5/10/2009 CUTE! I LOVE your story! 3 |
