Reviews for Teddy Lupin and The Untouchables
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17
Read the reviews why are people asking for updates it's been 5 years not ever going to happen this is abandoned if you want updates you have to take over the story...duh
Guest chapter 3 . 1/17
Damn can you get everyone's names wrong did you even try o do just a little research before you wrote this?
ginnyxharry chapter 39 . 11/8/2019
Are you going to keep writing this story? Just got very invested and want to continue reading!
texhex99 chapter 39 . 1/15/2019
Great story but where is the rest of it. it seems like it coiuld be really good.
Guest chapter 39 . 10/31/2018
Are you dead or do you not like posting chapters anymore, been for years since your last post, and it's sad cause you left it on a clif hanger and Its so good
Banana boo chapter 27 . 10/30/2018
Holy... what! This is so weird but so addictive
Guest chapter 8 . 9/22/2018
Caspian, definitely. I hope him and Samantha get together, teaching him what 'love' is. Not the I know what it is...

*Gets depressed over not having a boyfriend*
DiamondPadfootProngs chapter 39 . 7/26/2018
Are you ever going to update this?
Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2018
update
Vanessa chapter 4 . 4/27/2018
Don't you think it's very irritating to see them doing all that stuff on Sirius's bed
Guest chapter 33 . 1/27/2018
review
adamlally3001 chapter 39 . 10/19/2017
UPDATE!
adamlally3001 chapter 38 . 10/19/2017
Excuse me? "Your mother Kaia sent me," .? docid38341476 the girl. I'm actually quite amused - you said you checked grammar ands spelling!
adamlally3001 chapter 36 . 10/19/2017
They spit up again ?... girls and teens, two creatures I'll never understand.
adamlally3001 chapter 28 . 10/18/2017
Stop turning Teddy into a murderous git!
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