... :/

If that part with Red actually implied rape (and it really looks like it did), I got to say: it sorta felt like it's just there for shock value, dude. And pretty unnecessary shock value, at that. It's not like being held captive for over a decade to be forced to give birth to hybrid babies isn't horrific and traumatizing enough without need to add the rape -there's the dehumanization, the physical trauma, the invasiveness (is that a word?) of having something put into you. It's all there already! I could even forget there was any rape involved here! What's the point of the rape? Besides hating Red, I mean. Is this Red bashing?

And isn't it kinda a reaaaally unpractical and risky breeding method due to other species' different physiologies and any possible foreign STD they may carry? Not to mention that it really contradicts that thing about inter-species breeding Zim thought about at the beginning.

Don't get me wrong; so far I've been loving this fic a lot! Especially the way you've handled most of the trigger stuff (like the topics about racism -it's interesting to see it from the point of view of an alien species). But this really feels just like shock value.

... Meh, who knows. Still got some chapters to go to finish this, I may change my mind. I just felt like it needed to be said, dun mind me xP

The quote was from Shindler's list right? Sorry if I spelled the name wrong. I haven't seen the movie but I have heard the quote before. Anyway I love this story so far.

You would not believe how many different types of squeals I made reading this there were sad squeals and happy ones too! I really loved this and barely suppressed a scream when I read there was going to be a sequel!

wow wow awesome!

Great story i had a hard time puting it down to sleep,eat or work

I liked this. I did ... though some of this boarder-lined M rating though. ;

Regardless, I love the world that you have set up and its dark past. Better yet I'm glad that you have Membrane in this. I feel, that if Earth would ever take any action against the aliens, he would have to be involved.

Anyway, to the next fic!

The number of times I went "Aw, baby!" for poor Zim in this story must be a record. I'm glad I finally too k the time to read this one. Thank you for a well written ride. :)

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Your characterizations are easy to imagine. I just thought you ought to know; their voices, expressions, mannerisms etc. I love IZ fanfics with human OCs, and yours are the best I've read. Zim is still the main character, so that's a plus.

I do hope I finish reading the series before they’re taken down. I discovered them too late... I’m a fast reader, but my life will be pretty hectic from now on.

Well, regardless, keep up the good work and your stories. You're one of my top five Invader Zim fanfic writers on this site.

As long as it comes back, I'm ok with it.

Wait, why are you going to take the stories off? are they going to be part of the bigger project you mentioned? Or will you put them on your deviantart account? I really love these stories and like to come back and re-read them from time to time so I just want to be able to find these stories again. :)

I'm a bit sad that you will take this down but exited to know you will replace it with a "bigger and better" project.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

What!?
NO
DONT DO THAT!
Why on EARTH WOULD YOU TAKE IT DOWN?!
That doesn't make any sense!

Excellent story! Can't wait to read the next one and see what Zim ends up doing next!

O_O
OH. MY. GOD
RED F***ED DIBS MOM
O_O

HAHAHA! YODA XD