"Her eyes are fierce, with love for someone you have always hated, with hatred for someone you couldn't help but become."

That was one of my favorite sentences i've ever read. you have so much talent..just wanted to stop by and say i loved this!

Yep, this story shows Snape's feelings perfectly. I particularly like the first four lines of this story :) The 2nd person's POV works really well here, and his heartbreak is wrenching to read. Good job!:D

brilliant. extremely well written.

great story! I loved it! you put the doubts of Snape so well on paper!

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I hate Severus/Lily (lala, not listening to canon!) But this was beautiful. I adore much.

Oh, so brilliant and good. You take the characters and put them in the most artistic situations. Very, very good. )

I've yet to read a story from this angle. It was so powerful, I was holding my breath. Straight to the favorites list!

Wow...this is truly beautiful. I absolutely love it! Not only is the story wonderful (and so gut-wrenchingly heartbreaking, I just wanted to cry for poor Severus) but the writing is equally amazing! I love your style. I am definitely adding this to my favorites. :)

Beautifully written. Keep up the good work!

Poor Severus...

He never really understood did he?

Great fic, really portrayed everything really well. :)

Bundi