wow lily can seriously be retarded at times! this was good, so update soon!

this is really good! i have a couple suggestions tho. you might wanna hit spellcheck, and then look over the chapter yourself, b/c you keep spelling wormtail like warmtail. and then it seems to be a bit formal at times (obvi not when sirius is talking)but when the mauraders are talking to eachother. but i love how sirius moons moony. lmao!

-margaret

Looking forward to your next update.

hms makes me wonder...

updates soon please

update very soon!

i loved the chapter

update soon please

*singsong voice* LOVED IT! update.

James' outbursts where hilarious

crazy hilarious

please keep updating on this

okay ur a genius. it's offical

update soon please

heheheh i can just see padfoot jumping around everywhere along with prongs xD

makes it funny

i liked the touchy parts with humor...i dont really ever get to see that in writing...

dun-dun-dun suspence

good chapter tho

i loved it

and i think snape is an arse

that is all

update!