Reviews for The Line
BG224 chapter 10 . 12/22/2009
OMG please! update! this story is so good!
tennisgal456 chapter 10 . 3/27/2008
im glad you are back. hopefully the writers block will stay at bay, if it ever comes back, ill beat it down. and i think the first few chapters are fine, but if you feel the need to lengthen them, then do so. i know i cant wait to read number 53 it looks promising. its a shame titans go is ending so soon.

ah well onto the review,

little batman, hehe i wonder how his costume would look on robin? it might eat him.

all villians are partially insane!lol. oh no does that make me a partial villian? nah.

ooh just a little sooner and your car wouldnt have been touched cy.

superman? how old would he be in her time? just curious.

how come cy didnt day anything to star. she was there. guess he was just so absorbed with his worries for his car.

strange old man. who are you!lol. bet its slade in disguise and he is making a trap.

the newer chapters are great

keep it up
Somewhere In Time chapter 10 . 3/27/2008
Hurrah! You're back! I've missed you, you know, and I bet a bunch of other people have as well..

Thanks for the update! It's a good thing NF is going back, but somehow I suspect something would happen to prevent her from doing so...
SuPeR HyPeR chick 101 chapter 10 . 3/26/2008
OMG! so he knows will this mess up the future or something? and if so for good or worse? lovin it update soon!
waves2622 chapter 9 . 2/5/2008
i give your story ...

...A for Addicting!

wintergreen is such a cool name

seriously, it makes me feel all minty cool inside!
ashleyxxmichele chapter 9 . 1/8/2008
absolutly ah-mazingg.

I really like this story. I give it an 8.5!

Keep updatingg!
tennisgal456 chapter 9 . 1/7/2008
eh everyone is entitled to a break now an then.

lol i liked the imagine you are . . . . part.

NO I WAS THERE! it just didnt and of course we have to strip the t-car bit by bit. a story isnt complete unless you do it.

wow nf is playing therapist for star.

time for star to protect her?

my rating would have to be a 30 on a scale of 1 to 10.

you can blow up my jail but then ill come and blow up your computer and you will have no more powers! *evil laugh* whoops sorry slade snuck in for a minute

keep it up
Somewhere In Time chapter 9 . 1/7/2008
WHee! Updates!

Don't leave me on a cliffhanger for long, please!
IamtotallyKewlio chapter 9 . 1/6/2008
Well, I refuse to review, and I don't have a car for NF to wreck, and Slade can blow up my jail, 'cause that's where I am right now.

...

jk, jk

Nice chapter!

Also, P, Q, and 2!
jcyrose chapter 9 . 1/6/2008
that was a 8 b/c i wanted it to be longer. . .oh well good chapter!
TAUT13 chapter 9 . 1/6/2008
I am so happy!(bolowns(didn't spell that right) start falling from the ceiling) You updated this story! I really liked it. I would give it a 8 1/2 or a 9. I can't wait for you to update this story, I have been looking forward to this for a wile.
Kage of Seireitei chapter 9 . 1/6/2008
I give it a patented Vegeta 'OVER 90!' I want them to find out about Nightfire son. Plz. yea...poor Cyborg
TAUT13 chapter 8 . 12/14/2007
I am so happy that you updated this! I love it, I keep telling my friends to read it! I can't wait to read what the Titans face when they find out who her parents are! HaHaHaHa! I love exlamation points! I am really bored.
SuPeR HyPeR chick 101 chapter 8 . 11/26/2007
Update soon!

Super hyper chick 101
TooAwesomeToRequireAName chapter 8 . 11/25/2007
come on come on

i really wanna see the look on robins face when he finds out that NF is HIS AND STARFIRE'S KID!

-May
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