love it

i truly love biggs and alec :) they def are best friends.

Nice, I thought that it would have ended with Max telling Alec that it's him and then they kiss it out or they're holding hands at the flag raising in each others' arms, but I liked that Max finally realized what her heart truly wants.

Great job!

so I'm guessing that Max in heat only had them kissing and that was it...i hate their 'avoiding' phase -_- it sucks for them.

Max & Alec gave in and kiss! Got to hand it to White for having the plan well prepared and executed (wondered if he planned on TC to have their own rescue plan?) Was Max & Alec just kissing when the troops arrived or did they actually go farther...LOL I wonder.

Great story that involved that whole breeding partner aspect to the series! I always wondered about that LOL

loved this fic! did you make a sequel? There HAS to be one! I reali want to read about the child! Ohmigosh!

great job!

Well, I like a gooey ending.

I read this all in one sitting. Awesome storyline. And I loved what Joshua said to Max in this chapter. Aw I cant get enough of Alec/Max :D

Hey you're an aussie too? cool! have you got a livejournal? if not I'd love to see you there in the max/alec comms

i loved this story very much ending was very beutifful

i love this story, i just read it start to finish. here is some advise though, DO A SEQUAL! pretty please? _

So, now, how did Logan get the cure?

You did a great job of ending them. I don't quite get why Alec would have been anything other than confused/curious that Max would be so upset just seconds after her "dream man" comes along with the cure that will allow them to be together.

The description of the children was impressive.

Joshua is so cute. He is such a great combination of male, dog, and human.

I liked the ending- I loved the promise.

Forgot to mention in the previous chapter- Joshua was adorable.

What does IMHO mean?

Poor Danny and Key and everybody else. I hope Biggs is able to deal with his guilt so that he doesn't lose his relationship with Katt. I'm so glad that Biggs was able to make a step in the right direction- I hope he continues. Alec seems to be overdoing his whole teasing deal- he loves riling her up and he loves teasing her, but he's still a decent, caring guy. And it's hard to believe he turned her down, even if his reasons did make sense. How did she make it through her heat?

I guess I should know better than to ask to have the devil himself appear, huh. I wonder what you're going to do with this.

I don't quite get why Logan isn't involved in any of this at all. It seems like he could be kind of useful using computer hacks to get into security systems and helping to make sure they don't get surprised by the bad guys.

I love how Alec and Max were letting in to their real selves, even if it was pheremones-induced. The bugs were a good idea, though it might have been safer to actually plant it on them (i.e. hearing aid or even inside them like with Zack- it would be acceptable because it would be their choice and not something forced on them) and let them know about them. It's fun to be able to read a rescue. It would have been hilarious if they'd been caught in the actual act, but it's cleaner this way. I hope they're able to deal with it well.

Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Awesome! I was wondering why he would've gone through all that trouble to pick them up again when he could've just held on to them. Actually, I'm still kind of wondering. Why did he let them go? Anyway, still enjoying Kat and Biggs and wondering how you're going to save our two superheroes.

Thank heavens the trans know about the thermal imaging device before they find out the hard way- hopefully this will save Biggs' life. It's kind of nice that White is leaving them alone- obviously he expects "nature" to take over and get them to reproduce and then he'll come and get them. I hope he gets a "nice" little surprise instead. Jealous Max is fun Max as long as it doesn't go too long and as long as Alec isn't actually doing anything with the other girls. As for White- I so was not expecting him to go this devious. Promises to be interesting. Nice work :)