aww very sweet and good

That's so cute

I loved it. I normally dont like CreamBokkun stuff and am generally more TailsCream but i like this one and fully think you should make a sequel.

Aw, I LUV Cream/Bokkun!

IMPRESSIVE STORY! SO BOKKUN FINALLY CONFESSES HIS LOVE FOR CREAM! KEEP WRITING THIS STUFF! THIS STUFF'S GOLD!

Great to see more people who like Cream and Bokkun. In the manga Tactics, there's this weird little goblin called Muu-chan that looks a lot like Bokkun, so I guess he's a goblin!

(Laughs) Meta Knight! I can totally see it! You know, You should probably make a Halloween story that takes place after this! Bokkun could be Meta Knight, Sonic and Tails could be the Mario Bros.,Rouge could be Batgirl, etc. I can totally imagine the whole theme! Great chapter! 9 out of 10 this time! Shippo Out!

Me again. I found a few more typos.

Bokkun wandered(Not Wondered) helplessly through the dense jungle like had it all plan(n)ed out he would go through the forest till he reached the Chaotix house. He had gone over that one plan(No E) again and again in his head and now it’s being tested.

Not a half bad chapter. Overall, it gets 8.5 out of 10. Shippo Out!

I always figured Bokkun was something other than a robot. I just wasn't sure what. Also, I found a typo in this chapter.

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Bokkun flung his bag over his shoulder and head toward the window “you know that Eggman is gonna be furious” he warned “I don’t care!”. “It also means we’ll be enemies”. Those words made Bokkun freeze. Metal was the closest thing he had to a(?) room was silent for a long while.

I'm not sure what was meant to be there, but it looks fairly easy to fix. Other than that, it was a pretty good first chapter, if not a bit short for my tastes. Overall, it gets a 7.5 out of 10. Shippo Out!

ITS SO NOT FINISHED! YOU GOT TO DO MORE THAN THAT! PLS! I LOVE BOKKUNxCREAM! DONT GIVE UP ON ME NAW!

Yes it has been updated! I'm sorry I didn't review this story when I first read it. Nice story realy, you should write more! I always thought Bokkun was some sort of biological creation rather than a real robot. The part with Metal Sonic was cute and so was the ending ( I wish you made the story longer though)! I imagin Vanilla having trouble cooking food from the box, being a 'make it from scratch' chef. Nice fic.

Another chapter please. But it is awsome.

This is what the next chapter should be ’s leg started to hurt a little later and he stopped for a second, “Soon I’ll be with Cream and be happy!” He stood up and ran and soon was at Cream’s house. He ran in to find Vanilla cleaning, “Hello…miss, please tell me where Cream is.” Vanilla was shocked for a second but soon replied, “She is at Chris’ house with….” “Thanks!” Bokkun was out the door in a flash and ever though it hurt he ran and a little while later was at Chris’ mansion. Bokkun ran in the doors, around the stairs, opened a door, went into the den, ran towards Cream who was standing by Sonic, and cried, “Cream I love you!” His hands went over his mouth. What had he done.

I think it's cool, But I beg you. A new chapter! PLEASE?

I want to hear more. If you finish this with a good ending i'll

write one million storys. Because I haven't been inspired yet. Please finish this wonderful story.

It's about time someone wrote a good story about Bokkun! I can't wait to see what happens next!