hoping some Sirius B. & Regulus B. but it turned up Remus :D. it was good anyway, cus i do love this pair too. great. really cute *-* and so siriusish :D loved it. love, pads.

ADORABLE! SO CUTE! *does happy Sirius/Remus dance* YAY!

"like a child opening a treasure chest" referencing a child in the middle of a snog made me feel awkward for some reason.

Great!

Aww... that was sweet and the descriptions are just beautiful

Hooray for FF.N to not be glitchy! :)

You experimented with words very well. Everything was so descriptive, so vivid and even though I hate winter like Remus does, I would love it if someone showed me like that. Sirius just seems so carefree and so loving, how could you not enjoy something when he's around?

That was really great.

You did a really good job with this.

talking about wisking a girl..erm...guy...person off their feet. I'd absolutely melt if a guy did that to me. I'm like Remus, i hate winter, but if a guy showed me winter like that...