Your writing is beautiful, I really admire it.

beautiful

At last, I've found someone who has an appreciation for [at the very least] 'not' happy endings. AND 'English' English! My God, we have to get together sometimes; is Saturday good for you...?

Wow, I didn't think so much could be said in so few words. I love the simplicity and emotion in just a single page. This story shocks and awes with just metaphors and short sentences. love it.

Well written and poignant. This one tears at the heart a bit. I'm impressed with your way with words.

Umm, well.

When I first read this, I cried. I really was crying. There's something in the way you write... I have no idea. It just simply made me cry.

But then, maybe two days after that, I read it again. And then I was happy for some reason. Really strange.

But in general, it is very good.

OH GOODY! It's fluff but not! BUT FLUFFY NONE THE LESS! SHWA!

I adore the way you wrote it, dancing around the subject but bringing all sublte hints and correlations together in the end. Oohh. Me luffles. -snuggles-

By the by, happy endings are none-existant. How can one die and leave the living to be happy? (I suppose there are ways, but not in love stories, because there are no ends in life, only death). Ah, well, it's a happy fluffy moment in the present, so I will do what any fangirl does!

-glomps-

excellent story and amazing ending )

i would LOVE a prequel

:D

AW i love it...its so sweet

*runs around in circles with a "Cid Vin Love Forever" banner*

I hate happy endings too - and i love this story. You have an interesting, almost poetic style of writing, something i don't see much anymore. Anyway, well done and i hope you continue writing :)

-NextHeaven-