Reviews for Package
xxsnowfallxx chapter 12 . 2/25/2015
oh i thought it was Bishop from the black look but it was Karai! o.o
Oneeka chapter 13 . 6/5/2014
Loved it! I don't mind if it's a gay love. It's entertainin'!
erika chapter 4 . 4/11/2013
lolz "Nah, Mr. Kissy is generous, Mr. Kissy likes Leo and you, but Mr. Kissy loves Raph." great line
tmntlover2013 chapter 14 . 4/2/2012
Great job on the story, I liked it alot, keep up the great work and keep on writing.
nim draug chapter 14 . 10/2/2011
this was brilliant - read it all at once when i was supposed to be doing my homeowrk... oops!
quali chapter 8 . 10/28/2010
Mr. Kissy is the absolute cutest thing I have ever read. . It's soo sweet! And its interesting how you've mixed such innocent silliness with lust and vengance in one orange-clad turtle. I love how the turtles have so much depth of character in this fic. And I love your idea about pure love without physical intimacy for a while. It's a truth that not many other people give themselves the patience to find out. It's nice to read it in a fic. And Leo is totally the kind of turtle that would see it that way. Awesome fic. I can't wait to see what happens!
Eclips999 chapter 14 . 12/2/2009
*claps loudly* I think this is a wonderful sequil ti Webbed Glass. I love it. I was so into the fic that i couldn't stop reading! Either of them were just as captivating as ever. love your fics!
Lina03 chapter 14 . 8/26/2009
Very interesting story and I really didn't have any idea of who his stalker was until she revealed herself. Good job and Thanks for sharing.
tFantasyFan chapter 14 . 1/8/2009
Such a sweet ending. Such a funny, justified, lovable ending.

On the inside, I'm throwing a wild rave to celebrate the demise of Karai. It's given me a remarkable bout of outwardly expressed peace. I love that she's dead.

Oh, Mikey, you are too much. Butt-slapping antics. When will you learn *fancy laughter*?

It was an excellent chapter. Maybe a bit short for my taste, but still excellent. I love your fics. Let's see what other stuff you've added since last I visited!
tFantasyFan chapter 13 . 1/8/2009
OH GET HER, RAPH, LEO, FLYING MONKIES, ANYBODY! GET HER!

This suspense is killing me. I've read the fic, and the suspense is still killing me. You are awesome. Oh, poor Mikey, and poor Donnie.

To a lesser degree, poor Raph and Leo. I hope they get violent and kick some major ass (pardon the language, if it isn't to your taste).

Still well-written and wonderfully characterized. Definitely awesome.
tFantasyFan chapter 12 . 1/8/2009
Karai! KARAI! I SHALL VANQUISH HER MYSELF! *brandishes sword. Scratch that. brandishes FIERY sword*

Donnie, come on, common sense strongly opposes that action. Guess it's too late now. Fantastic. Two turtle-nappings.

I hope Raph and Leo tear her a new one. And then I hope they tear up the new one they already tore her, leaving her with nothing. Yeah.
tFantasyFan chapter 11 . 1/8/2009
Oh, the lover's quarrels! The drama! It's nice to see that the tension gets to everybody. You know, it's not just Donnie getting all freaked out, it effects the entire family. Very well-done.

Mikey, no! Why, why did you walk off alone? Psychos are...well...Psychotic! They don't care who they pick off as long as they get a hostage! Doom!
tFantasyFan chapter 10 . 1/8/2009
Yay, a starring role for Raph! He's going to plan things and work together with Leo!

It was so sweet, how Splinter wanted to keep them safe! I like that he's not the bad guy. Go Raph, you rock, everyone else rocks too! Just to a lesser degree. Well-written, even with the spelling stuff.

I've become aware of the fact that my reviews are non-sensical at the worst moments. After a while it became hard to find something for every chapter, but I am still resolved to review each one. Not a stalker-y way. Just feeling up to giving out a million reviews. Thanks ahead of time for enduring.
tFantasyFan chapter 9 . 1/8/2009
Oh, good, we get to see some April. I liked the little change in the lineup. It was well done!

I like the talents you give Raph, with the knowing of criminal minds. And DUDE, the stalker is creeping me out. Even more. How? HOW?

Aww, loving sisterly threats. Excellent chapter.
tFantasyFan chapter 8 . 1/8/2009
You have an excellent talent for combining humor, drama and horror and balancing them out perfectly. It's a very good trait, so make sure you hang onto that.

Loving the banter, loving the protective Mikey and Raph and Leo, just loving everything so far.
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