Awww! I loved this! Very cute! :D

Kewl, an explanation/ scene to show what was going on. I really liked it, awsome job

Wow... You're right, this SHOULD've been in the movie. Lovely, well done. :)

Hey, love this story as much a s ever - "My word. What a greeting" is still a perfect Ego line - but am mainly reviewign to tell you that there's a Ratatouille section on FFN now! I've moved all my stories there. Best, sarah

I don't even know what to say. This was absolutely perfect; everyone was more than in character, they were on spot. Everything was strategically written, and with some things that I never would have thought of, it all came together perfect. You did such a wonderful job, I'm in awe. :D

that's me

ahhelga

aka Pauline

I loved this. I could picture this as the missing scene from the movie. I love the ending.

Hmm, I thought I had already reviewed this; I read it ages ago! I really liked your story. I love how you wrote Ego, and Linguini misunderstanding what he said. Also, gotta love Colette's forehead slaps. Very in character. Bravo!

I hope you'll check out my Ratatouille fics, too!

I liked your version this missing scene. I also would have loved to read how it went from "Be more discreet about the rats" to the name it had in the movie. :P

I loved the story! Did Colette french kiss Linguini at the end of the story?

Basically, I agree with everything PutMoneyInThyPurse said. :) I'll also add that this line:

"Be more discreet about the rats."

is adorable. :D

(I also love your pen name!)

I like this story. It serves it's purpose as a transitional scene. Good job with the right characterizations and the movements.

So...what's the new location? New York?

Lol! Adorable. :-)

Wonderful story!

You MUST do more Ratatouille stuff.

:)

This was a cool story. Linguini can be soo clueless sometimes and you pulled that off nicely.