| Reviews for Villain |
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  Guest chapter 12 . 6/14/2019 This chapter *FACE PALM* Okay. I get that she isn't thinking straight because of the murders back at her school. But why, oh, WHY WOULD SHE DO SOMETHING THAT STUPID?! And no, don't give me that "destiny" dreck. The evidence is building up right in front of everyone including HER, and she goes and does something like THIS. Are we really supposed to believe that? Why doesn't her family just keep her on a leash?! "The narrator tends to be biased." That's still no excuse. |
 Acengreenstreak chapter 7 . 4/29/2019 Honestly, I was onboard and enjoying every second until this chapter. No offense to your style or plot devices, but it's going a direction that's not my thing. I can recognize talent when it's there, though. And great fic. |
| Death Battle chapter 21 . 3/4/2019 This story's version of Buttercup VS The Blossom and Bubbles of Diary Of Buttercup by Cheshire's Riddles |
| Guest chapter 21 . 6/22/2018 Happy Summerween! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2018 Pictures, please! |
| H.Cesar chapter 21 . 4/15/2018 It was a BEAUTIFUL story. I love the perspective that the villain has in most of the stories, one of "Do not wait for God to do justice, take everything in your hands and do it for yourself" It's just something so profound ... One of the best stories I've seen, I do not know what to expect from the continuation. |
| Nyaanyaarin chapter 21 . 3/28/2018 this fic is a masterpiece! |
| RickSanchezC-137 chapter 2 . 12/17/2017 That is some f#cked up Pinnochio and Gepetto right there. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/17/2017 New candidate for the Bad End Friends in Fan fiction! Other members: Bipper Pines Insane Mabel Pines Evil Morty Smith Beast!Wirt Ice Finn Evil Star Butterfly Demon Marco Evil Rick Sanchez Diamond Steven Universe |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2017 It would be better if this story had more of an ending like "Old Yeller." I just love a story with a happy ending. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 6/10/2017 Powerpuff girls sexist! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/10/2017 Axolotl |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/10/2017 UGH, HIM. SERIOUSLY, HE'S NOT THE ONLY DEMON WHO CAN DESTROY YOU. OBVIOUSLY, HE TASTES LIKE LOBSTER. MAN, I FIND HIM INCREDIBLY IRRITATING. ALMOST AS MUCH AS TIME BABY AND THAT BIG, FRILLY KNOW-IT-ALL. AT LEAST I DRESS BETTER. HECK, I'M PRETTY SURE HE STARTED THE WHOLE LGBT THING IN HUMANS. OH, WHAT THE HECK, IT'S A FACT! HE REALLY SHOULD HIDE HIS DIARY BETTER! BUT HE NEEDS SOME SORT OF.. MATE. SAW HIS BROWSER HISTORY ONCE. IT TOOK XANTHAR RIPPING OUT MY EYE AND BEATING KRYPTOS WITH IT TO MAKE ME FORGET. AND I THOUGHT PINE TREE'S INTERNET HISTORY WAS DISTURBING! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/10/2017 Well, this was...different. In a great way. |
| YROOXRKSVIGIRZMTOV618 chapter 2 . 6/10/2017 HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEH. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAA! WELL WELL WELL. LOOKS LIKE MS VANILLA JUST GREW SOME CHOCOLATE CHIPS! NAME'S BILL. BILL CIPHER. AND THIS FREAK MIGHT JUST BLEND IN WITH MY HENCH MANIACS. A MUCH BETTER CANIDATE THAN SIXER. TELL HER I WILL LEAVE HER MY CARD. I CAN HELP HER OUT ALL SHE HAS TO DO IN RETURN IS FIND MY STATUE AND SHAKE IT'S HAND. THEN RECITE THE SUMMONING SPELL RITUAL, AND DESTROY THE STATUE! THEN IT'S WEIRDMAGEDDON: MARK II! TO HAVE A DEAL, SHE NEEDS TO DRAW ME ON HER HAND AND SHAKE HANDS WITH HERSELF. REMEMBER, REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD, BYE! |
