Good story though only thing I don't get is why didn't break it up into separate pages for the chapters. The one long page is a bit much

this is hot, I can't get enough of your Yumi/Sei. Sigh. Any chances of you writing more? I know it has been like, 5 years. Oh my, I'm 5 years late to discover this fic. But better late than never, right?

This story was INCREDIBLE! I loved the mix of romance and humor and I really like your writing style. I also learned a few interesting things from this story as well as from 'Force A Denial' (my vocabulary has also incresed, though a few of these terms I don't think I can say without people looking at me funny which is actually okay since I'm painfully used to it).

I admire you as an author, definitely one of my best reads ever! You keep everything realisitic because you don't bother trying to pretty things up, which I respect. It sucks that fanfiction had to lose such a great author. Won't be much others like you

loved it! the story was a great mix of sweetness, emotion, romance and best of all humor. i laughed a lot! thanks! :)

Thanks for your story. I enjoyed your narrative style.

Have to agree with Yumi that Yoshino's discourse on sexual intimacy was thesis-worthy, with the amount of research and time that they seemed to reflect (hers, or rather yours, I guess).

I enjoyed your use of third person omniscient voice (does that even exist?) interspersed with the dialogues, because they lent warmth and humor to what might otherwise have been standard fare.

I enjoyed your characterizations of Kei and Sei, and it was funny that you made Sei smooth, when in the series, she was so rough around the edges.

Honestly, Yumi was not Yumi at all, a very different person: grittier, un-bubbly (haha). But I appreciate that the story would not work with the Yumi of the light-novels, because that Yumi is not a lesbian. So I was ready to suspend belief and go with the narrative, because I, too, am a fan of Sei/Yumi.

Definitely worth a re-read.

Oh my word. I had forgotten how much I liked you as a writer, and fanfiction as a medium.

This was probably the most grown-up, well-thought-out piece on relationships I have ever read. You got Sei and Yumi's personalities down to a T (although, as you know from my own fic, I would disagree about Sei's aversion to cursing). To make this a 'well-rounded critique' as FFnet reminds us we Must All Do, I think their voices all sounded overly similar, but for a piece of this quality that's a largely insignificant issue. Your personal voice, sense of humor, and set of opinions shone through here and I loved every word of it.

Well, shit, now I miss writing fanfiction. I see you've been out of the game for quite a while too. I think that's what Huey Freeman would call a Damn Shame. I wonder what you've been up to.

I gotta say you've got a way with dialogue.

Yoshino definitely impressed me the most. She comes off as having a much larger vocabulary and knowledge bank than a normal high school kid would have (Very in-character). I could honestly see her talking like this! Just reading this over and over keeps bringing a smile to my face.

On a side note: I took absolutely NO offense at Sei's comment. In fact, I endorse. :) Retaliation IS the American way. Just Al Qaeda, they know what I'm talking about.

But I digress, I honestly wish I had your gift with words. You've got true talent for this. Keep it up!

Awesome story, so many parts made me laugh. Thanks for writing.

i relly liked it

This was a very good fic 3 I loved it!

An awesome story, there are not many YumiXSei shippers so I really enjoyed reading this along with your other stories since I find the pairing to be wonderful.

Whoah, this fic alone has overqualified you for my fave authors list. It seems like it's been a while since you've wrote anything, but I still hope you'll write some more in the future. Cheers.

I just wanted to say that a love you. A good, long, heart-warming Sei/Yumi story is all that I needed to make my day complete. I love this pairing. Write a hundred more stories.

Loved the banter between Yumi and Yoshino. It's exactly how I'd imagine the two of them acting if the topic of sex ever came up. It amused my tiny brain for awhile. I prefer more sensual stories, but it wasn't bad. :P

Great story, absolutely loved it. Yumi and Sei, wow.