One in a million! The second best 28 days later stories here on FF, god job and seriously well written! Wish there was more!

Amazing, really. You manage to portray a lot of emotions, and a lot of gore through just a few simple words. I like the spastic punctuation and parenthesis, too. I tend to do that a lot in my own writing, and people are always like, 'what the fuck?' I really think it adds to the effect of whatever you're writing.

Anyway, great story. I really wish more writers like you would ass to the 28 Days section - it doesn't have enough well-written stories in it.

Nice piece of work. Angst-ty and well-written. And I liked how you kept to the movie, but added stuff too (like Dad and the haunted house). Good voice too. Overall, this is an excellent piece of work! :)

A-MA-ZING.

beautiful.

nice nice work! :)

Yup amazing

Wow... this was really good stuff. It almost feels more like a poem than a story.

Oh. . . my. . . gosh. That was truly beautifl, lilnee! The description, the gore, the simple little words that made you cringe in morbid delight. It was all beautiful! Wow. I cannot resist reading your other stories.

Definately a favourite.

~ Kate ~